|Reviews for The Antichrist Cometh|
| Curclark chapter 19 . 11/24
I don't care if he uses her for "relief" but I really don't want them to be a couple. Albedo is clingy and completely insane. She is dangerous. He needs to be clear that they are not a couple or else other females/males will start disappearing randomly as she murders anyone he flirts/sleeps with to remove competition. There needs to be clear boundaries set.
| Curclark chapter 7 . 11/22
He definitely shouldn't have told her she did nothing wrong. If she truly serviced him while he was asleep without his permission, then it is rape. I don't think he should condone the rape of a Supreme Being. It sets a bad precedent and will lead to trouble in the future. I really dislike Albedo as a character and wish there were more fanfictions where he doesn't choose to change her settings to 'in love with Momonga'. I don't think he should roll over like a dog and accept Albedo's advances just because she's attractive. She is so crazy that it is scary. That scene in the anime where Ainz reports Seba's human has been kidnapped and he yells at her for thinking saving her for the glory of the name of their guild is a waste her reaction after she finished speaking to Momonga gave me chills. Realizing how crazy she actually is makes me want to tell Momonga to run.
| Curclark chapter 6 . 11/22
I like the story. There are a lot of grammar and missing words. Example:
"You made sir Dracul"
CorrectionYou made it, Sir Dracul!"
| Bruh chapter 4 . 11/16
So childish, Momonga my ass, you just use that name to disguise your OC, and not even a good written one at that, why don't just replace him with your OG? can't bait reader without using original main character name? pathetic.
| Listorel chapter 7 . 9/15
Considering all the starting changes... Almost verbatim copy/repetition of the original, is this some kind of joke?
| Listorel chapter 1 . 9/15
From the very beginning, it felt like the author sent the balance away. Let's give more advantages and remove the disadvantages, how st. Although it’s more likely that he missed them, that doesn’t make that look any better. However, as well as combinations of name and race and nicknames (which, given the clearly Scandinavian bias of Ig., is a little out of place).
| branphillips001 chapter 29 . 8/27
Common could care less if their ruler is benevolent or cruel, what they care about is if they are competent and keep their word.
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/14
How the hell nigun knows about brita?
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/14
I think nigun is not high enough position to know the world class item,
| Guest chapter 39 . 1/2
I read the whole thing up to chapter 38 in a couple days. Absolutely loved it. So funny and such a cool idea. Love the mixing of different games and lores. 11/10 want to read more.
| EOS Aizen chapter 39 . 12/29/2022
Despite the conflicting reviews this story received, I must say I had fun reading this story. It was rough at the start of course but I can see the improvements in your writing as the story progressed. Sure, some might say it's edgy, but I don't see the harm at all. This is a story about a vampire lord aiming to rule the world after all. I can also see that the story is very well thought out and you must put a lot of effort into this one, so props to you my friend. I must also insist that continue with this plotline if possible. Maybe as a crossover, perhaps, considering the direction you're taking this, this is no longer a purely overlord story. (Well, considering you're are basing Luci on Alucard, this hasn't been one for a long time but still, you get the point)
| ivokk4404 chapter 39 . 11/24/2022
Please continue more))
| Lord Of Domination chapter 1 . 10/20/2022
is that the joke of the century or something? it's obvious that author is too much of a fainthearted wimp to make a villain MC, sadly.
| Ltbutterfly287 chapter 39 . 10/20/2022
This became really cringe as everything went on. it wasnt bad seriously was way to cringe and edgy.
| Ltbutterfly287 chapter 30 . 10/20/2022
who the fuck is this? is it touch me, cause im pretty sure hes the only one who would watch all this from the side and not even attempt to approach him and talk to him. honestly i fail to understand his reasons for doing this as well. its not like he was some edgy emo kid who hated everything his actions truly seem excessive and really blown out of proportions based solely on your idea that being undead makes you unfeeling.