Reviews for The Antichrist Cometh |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm dropping this always hated those two girls. Was expecting to see a different momonga. He should just slaughter all the humans of the village |
![]() ![]() ![]() Reread complete, thanks for your hard work. The grammar and use of english could be improved but otherwise it is a good fic. I feel your writing skills have definitely improved as the story progressed |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why did the story stop so nearly done to man i was looking forward to the sequels |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it make keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() Still That Good Shit |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving it so far as we get further into story we start to see more of the deafferents you made. |
![]() ![]() Love it please update its one of the best overlord fanfiction |
![]() ![]() ![]() What kind of retards tells his enemies where he fucking lives? Holy shit you are dumb beyond belief. Especially when you know they have an item that will kill pretty much everyone in your home. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() you know this was suppose to be a darker version its not he'll Clementine is still alive this quite tame compared to the series |
![]() ![]() ![]() every time they swear it puts me out of the story. the characters don't speak or think what they say that way. their not following the manner in which they speak and act. I'd say this is a crackfic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Best ending man just awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() 4.9/5 stars |
![]() ![]() ![]() What the hell is a "Virgin Senses" Demi! |