Reviews for Acedia
Butteranime chapter 16 . 7/18
Plz update
Williread chapter 4 . 3/30
I love how well thought out every thing is
Jasmine Julia Soleo Bias chapter 7 . 3/6
yeah fucker give it some MINE MINE MINE yeah fucker give it some MINE M
RaveFoil063 chapter 1 . 10/15/2018
instead of agender you could have said gender neutral
Guest chapter 16 . 9/21/2018
I want to see hari find his guardians
Guest chapter 16 . 9/15/2018
I really cant wait for the next update since its so good..
Thank u for creating this story..good luck!
FictionGobler20 chapter 1 . 8/11/2018
Feb-Augmonths. Anyone else feel abandoned?
Zaviei chapter 2 . 7/8/2018
Hi! I only started reading your story but my immersion blew up to bits when I came to Lily and Petunia's names. See, "née" means "born" in french, so when you say "Petunia Evans née Dursley" you say "Petunia Evans born Dursley", which is not the case, she's a Dursley née Evans. As for Lily she's not a Potter née Potter but née Evans XD
That's all, I hope you'll edit these mistakes out. Now I'll go back to my immersion.
Guest chapter 15 . 7/2/2018
KEEP WRITING PLZ
Guest chapter 12 . 6/30/2018
*laughing*

Delivering a eulogy and the guy isn't dead yet... how Varia is that!
Guest chapter 7 . 6/30/2018
*evil laugh*

That poor, poor man!

Sarcasm intended there, of course *snickers again*
Saturnblue chapter 16 . 6/6/2018
It looks like Harry's guardians is coming closer to him as things progressed. It would be fun to be part of chaos with this bunch adding fuel to the burning flame. It's hilarious to see all those omakes. Love the curse that the blacks had with the desert and fun things to see it created creatures out of those ingredients and it remind me of Nevile's potions in Snape's classroom in canon.
Jed Cat chapter 4 . 6/1/2018
whenever i read the chaliapin steak rice bowl all i think about is shokugeki no soma
Elizabeth Kelly1 chapter 16 . 5/22/2018
this is a really good story but could you update?
Guest chapter 5 . 5/22/2018
You said price instead of prince when they were ordering
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