This story was absolutely amazing I loved every moment. I can't wait to read more of your work. Regards Toni

This was lovely thank you

This was so erotic.

been a minute since ive really enjoyed a story like this, amazing job!

This story was a joy to read. The thing with Charlie was a huge surprise! I loved Bella and Edward's many awkward interactions too. Thank you for writing. :-)

I’m totally bewildered, what happened? So it was all mostly a trick, she wrote all of it and they had kids, but she was never changed? But now she gave the ok? Huh. Yes please help me understand.

I just don't understand how this absolutely brilliant story has such a relatively small amount of likes. Thank you for sharing this!

They have kids? How? Adopted? This was a really good, crazy story. Enjoyed the ride.

I love the way this chapter ended. “Oh please, Bella!” Lol

Sitting on that beam again! Haha

Oh wow. You set up this situation so well. I’m was beginning to get a little aggravated with her constant denial but now it all makes sense. Well done!

Loved this chapter and the intimate moments between them

So the shop is gone. Hmm

. I wondered how much of Moosal is in this Bella.

Now I’m picturing Jacob running around her house “marking” his territory. I can’t decide if he should have two or four legs. Haha. She could install a fire hydrant.