OH MY GOSH! It's so cute that Jughead wrote a book for Bailey... awwww! I can totally see him writing quite a few books for his baby girl throughout her life, and as she gets older, she grows more and more aware of what the books are about. THANK YOU for such an amazing fanfiction, one of the better ones out there!

Okay... I really like how you played it out with Jughead. I mean, yes, it was very harsh of Gladys to just flat-out technically abandon her granddaughter just like her son had done (unknowingly, of course). I really like how you wrote Jughead's reaction. He had so much pent up anger and hurt at the fact that she abandoned him and took Jellybean away from him as well, and the fact that she abandoned his daughter sort of set off the bomb, so to speak. Yeah. I really loved this chapter. Great job!

NOOOO! I mean, I get that Doug is dying and everything, but the idea of Jughead leaving Riverdale AGAIN, except this time knowing about Bailey and KNOWINGLY leaving her... that just breaks me.

I have confidence that Jughead is going to come to his senses, and tell Betty why he has to leave, and that he promises to come back... for Bailey. I mean, he loves her. It's been said so many times in the text, and that his daughter has become his favorite sight... he can't just leave that, can he? Well, I refuse to think so. Super excited for the Bughead in the next chapter!

Wow, just wow... I don't have any words to express my delight after reading the last three words of this story... Reading this story has been like a rollercoaster ride and I enjoyed every moment of it...

I just discovered the world of Riverdale a couple of weeks ago via YouTube and I decided to explore this series a bit... I have just started watching the first season of the series on Netflix just to kill some time and get myself rejuvenated enough and get myself excited enough to resume my work as a software developer...

In the pursuit of exploring further, I started browsing the stories on this site, in hope of finding a good story to read... And, lo and behold, my wish was granted but instead of finding a good story, I accidentally stumbled on one of the best fanfictions that I have ever read in my life...

I absolutely adored the way you have represented the characters of Betty and Jughead and especially, Bailey... It is so difficult to infuse personality to a non-canon character but you absolutely excelled at it...

(Now, I dread watching the actual show because I definitely know that Bailey will definitely won't exist and considering at this point in time, the future of the relationship of Betty and Jughead is on the verge of ending, I don't know whether I should continue watching the show or distance myself from it, to avoid getting burnt...)

It took me nearly 2 full days to complete the whole story and I was feeling quite unmotivated and low when I began reading this story and reading through the act 1 of this story was an emotionally exhaustive experience but as the relationship between Jughead and Betty began prospering and blossoming, my mood also improved with it...

And, now I am content and satisfied after reading the conclusion of this story... And, coming back to the story, your writing was so immersive that I could actually visualize the words that were written on the webpage...

So in the end, thank you so much for writing this wonderful story...

Till next time,
Harryfan011.

aww i read this story more than ten times already and never get over it i love this fanfic sooooooooo much

This was completely worth the read. I opened this fic yesterday and had to read it the entire way through without stopping. Great work

Whyte wyrm

Wow.. It feels like jughead himself wrote this. Truly amazing, i mean it. Im not done but this is hands down the best fanfic i ever read. It would be awesome if this was a what-if comic

THIS IS SO GOOD

I'm really enjoying the story so far... the boyfriend however has me a little apprehensive.

mainly because good on Betty that she's dating. but I do love her with Jughead. and now I feel bad for this unknown guy who's probably been pretty good to her.

at least the fake as complete so I guess I'll get all my answers when I get to the end.

That was the best fanfiction ever wrote!
It was so well thought out, And so cleverly written!
Well done!

Best wishes,
Bugheadlover101

I personally love the flashbacks, I think you portray them very well!
This story is amazing! I love how you link everything together, and you do it so well!

All the best,
Bugheadlover101

This fanfiction is one of the best I've ever read!
You have got a great imagination and you're a very talented writer!

Well Done!

All the best,
Bugheadlover101

when’s the smut coming lmao have they done it i can’t tell

Dead Inside by X really fits these two when Jug found out about Betty and Casey