Jesus F Christ! Your writing is something else!

Wow... this has been by far the most magically arousing scene I've ever encountered in HP fanfiction. Just wow

Thank you for your hard work! Ill just pretend in my mind thought that Harry also stopped being a prat and comes tk visit on occasion. This particular Ginny can fuck right off haha! Thansk again. Its 2:12am so now I must sleep!

Although I'm sure that there are many readers that would thoroughly enjoy this story, I'm afraid this is just a bit too blunt for my personal tastes. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

I do not get why Hermione couldn't *TELL* her parents the truth even if they can't get their memories back. She can show them magic, she can maybe have some evidence of their lost lives, there might be some equivalent of a DNA test to do... might they be mad? Cut off contact? Sure. But that was a possibility if their memories were restored anyway. Let them have a chance to know their daughter and granddaughter...

amazing

Chego a estar triste que acabou essa história. Queria ter visto mais sobre os outros personagens no epílogo, ou uma continuação. Igual, foi completamente sensacional.

He should for hermione sake care what will happen if they are found out as he doesn’t care what will happen to him if they are found out but he should care what will happen to her if they are found out ! Disgusting behaviour, Professor."

He looked up at the ridiculous Fat Lady in her frame, puffed up with her own self-importance at being the chosen guard for Gryffindor Tower.

"It was indeed. Thankfully, Madam, I do not give one single shit about your opinion, and if I wish to kiss that young lady every night in this hallway, just I have tonight, I shall."

He flicked her a two-fingered salute and spun on his heel, his boots making no noise as he flew down the hallway at his usual blisteringly fast rate.

Oh my god they didn’t even silence the room or and lock the door wow that risky ? Or did hermione spell protect them from that ? Also they didn’t cast a contraceptive spell?

It’s really unfair that women’s first time a painful and yet men’s first time are NOT painful !

If he is to have sex for the first time the night as well do it properly and where they would be tumbling about the bed with one another.

And might as well do it without the Engorgio upon the bed, raising it up higher so that Granger's hips were level with his own. He did not wish to ask her to change position, and theirs was not the kind of arrangement where they would be tumbling about the bed with one another.

Why that happen I mean hermione a beginner of Legilimens and yet Severus is a powerful Occlude can not expel hermione? That’s weird hermione must be a powerful Legilimens!? Wow ! ….. Also

Severus is a virgin wow that’s so cool !

Sure it’s dangerous for them to talk about the lessons in the Great Hall. Or did the silence the area? Also won’t Harry I needed to hide his mind from dark lord to end the war, so we can keep the dark Lord out of his mind while trying to figure out what to do next?

This keeps my attention and is very juicy to read. That being said, a bit uncomfortably misogynistic. It’s the fact the girls almost always have negative interactions, and Hermione thinks lowly of them as well. I know JK Rowling had that issue a bit too. Not for me, but definitely good pacing and interesting idea, at least.

so good! well written which is hugely important to me. thank you!

What an interesting twist to the canon of the last book; wonderfully done.