|Reviews for Deviant Art|
| laudgm94 chapter 1 . 1/12
Write more PLEASEE! I know this would be a great story :)
| MadasaHatterKNP chapter 1 . 9/18/2017
Please add more to this i love it! Also Hi fellow texan! I hope you and your family were ok during the hurricane.
| RedAce16 chapter 1 . 8/27/2017
Please make this multi chapter! This is really good! I'm loving it! I really hope you keep posting!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/17/2017
Lol this was awesome. :-) Pleaseee make this a multi-chap because i need to know if Maui knew it was him or not because I believe he's not THAT dense...? Why?! Why must you write a good openong and leave is hanging!? Please DON'T turn out to be one of those people who have really good abilities but don't write for years.
| Artistic Ane chapter 1 . 8/6/2017
This was cute, and funny, and I could definitely see more happening here. I hope you continue and expand upon this. Because I'm curious: how could Maui think that Moana's talking about herself (even though technically she kind of is) but not think that HE'S the object of her affections?
| Sunshine-Midnight123 chapter 1 . 7/29/2017
This is really good! Awesome job capturing their emotions! Hopefully more to come!
| les7091 chapter 1 . 7/28/2017
Omg this needs to be more than a one shot
| Enchantress47 chapter 1 . 7/27/2017
Oh my god! Please make another chapter! I would LOVE to see Moana like, make up a name, say, Anthony, and Maui try any go after him, going around to different islands, and asking for 'Anthony' !
| Wen chapter 1 . 7/27/2017
Very good story, you got the characters down pretty well.
Although, I get the feeling that Moana and Maui are in the same boat...
Please continue! 3
| Bamon chapter 1 . 7/24/2017
I'm not logged in right now but I just wanted to say that I really need to read more chapters of this story. Please?
| StarSpinner678 chapter 1 . 7/25/2017
ohmygawd as a one-shot this is fantastic! Instant Fave!
As a fan of Older-Moana/Maui, I'd love to see more if you ever decided to write more! *Squee!*
I like your writing style in this chapter, it flows nicely, but the ' marks around the italicised thoughts is possibly a little much. It did take me a moment to work out she said it outloud. Other than that, it's well done, and I love the almost-cliffhanger end. Makes a nice touch to a oneshot and invites the reader to read on if it's continued.
I shall follow this, just in case :D
| Rieko.Nishihara chapter 1 . 7/25/2017
I officially say...this definitely needs to be something...how could you leave me hanging on that crumbling cliff?!
| Blackwillow55 chapter 1 . 7/24/2017
Loved it. Loved it. Loved it. OMG please continue this please please T_T wonderfully written and so In character!