|Reviews for The Lady of the Flies|
| ShadowPhyr chapter 21 . 11/6
"hopefully nothing close to a year long break" well... you have 8 days still I guess?
in all honesty I have enjoyed this story so far regardless of whether or not you continue writing it. hope you are doing well!
| Wicked.A chapter 21 . 8/25
Love that ending (presuming it's riss now wanting to help Taylor find her dad) very nice story so far
| Wicked.A chapter 16 . 8/25
I really like how you included issei's parents at the end there shows that Taylor still retains her humanity where it matters
| SMB chapter 6 . 7/9
You still had Akeno be 10 and didn't change it. You're skipping all of the important parts we want to read about. Where's Taylor training? Magic learning? At this chapter, it's been 4 months and she's done nothing important. You also skipped reporting the stray devil and Taylor getting major props for it.
| yukicrewger2 chapter 8 . 6/15
I might have told you over PM, but I thought I'd post it here, after having the exact same thought during a re-read.
I am now imagining Queen Administrator, all continental US sized crystaline mass of her, with tiny (in comparison) devil wings
| guestinator chapter 21 . 5/30
My only issue with this last chapter is not seeing my other reviews that pointed out plot holes... And how Taylor after 6 years is still essentially the exact same with zero growth.
| Redpo12 chapter 21 . 5/12
More dammit it's been months.
| deathgeonous chapter 21 . 5/7
I decided to reread this again. And now, now I WANT MORE! Still, nice job on what you've written so far, thanks for writing it, and bye for now.
| Terracotta Tortilla chapter 21 . 4/30
Great story. I'm a dick when it comes to reviews, but I genuinely have zero complaints. Good job
| Terracotta Tortilla chapter 14 . 4/29
Taylor will need to get over that fear of making clones by the time Riser comes around. He'll burn her to a crisp, and his peerage will explode her.
| Terracotta Tortilla chapter 13 . 4/29
Good, she's actually ending threats to herself and others now. I thought she was going to let this one go too.
| Terracotta Tortilla chapter 11 . 4/29
Issei doesn't care about consent, what a weird guy. Bury him in the ground
| Terracotta Tortilla chapter 1 . 4/29
I wonder if Taylor will immediately trust this complete stranger who has made her into a servant.
| TheFatGuy2020 chapter 21 . 2/11
Binged and enjoyed. lookin 4ward 2 more
| Malkeus chapter 9 . 1/31
Why oh why did noone step on riser's head to keep it from inflating. Beginning from the first moment he referred to himself in the third person...