Reviews for The Pretense
Blouta chapter 44 . 2h
Harry! What a lovely cliff hanger! I can’t wait to read the next chapter!
marsram chapter 44 . 4h
Great chapter but was a bit confused by the interaction between Draco and John Smythe and the comparison to Harry. Had to reread to clarify if it's Draco or Smythe who's being compared to Harry, and at first I thought it was implying that Smythe was a disguised Harry, which didn't make sense. Especially with what comes next. Sorry, it's late for much enjoyed this chapter though. Thanks for the timely updates!
zazanga chapter 44 . 5h
She's finally seeing him again! It's happening! Thanks for this great chapter and story!
Rachelie chapter 44 . 7h
Way to go with the cliff-hanger! I very much appreciate your story and hope to see an update soon!
Sydious chapter 44 . 9h
Woman, that was good.
MonJoh chapter 44 . 10h
Aha! Can't wait to see what happens ...
muddier waters chapter 44 . 14h
muddier waters chapter 43 . 14h
I love them so much
Virgie Cires chapter 44 . 14h
Very entertaining I love this chapter
muddier waters chapter 42 . 14h
oh holy shit
Iluvenis chapter 44 . 21h
Asking Narcissa for cleaning charms me laugh out loud!
Also, the Severus painting bit, and later with Potter's quip, had me rolling.
Everything is coming to ahead! I can't wait! :)
xXMizz Alec VolturiXx chapter 44 . 22h
Great chapter
It'sHardIKnow chapter 44 . 22h
wait what
kaira-hime chapter 44 . 23h
yay! it's happening! love Harry!
Jill the Ripper chapter 42 . 9/18
Omigooood I can't eveeeen

First off, I loooooove Narcissa even more in this chapter... Especially the, "There's always room for another. Lucius, get the shovel." Aaaaah I'm FREAKING OUT

And Dolohov and Rabastan... wow, those were unexpected but I love that too... And Dolohov's end line was just. . . I'd say it's too harsh but it's perfection as well...
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