Reviews for The Pretense
Seniia7 chapter 4 . 6/28/2020
oh, i've read this one before... i'm starting to remember things!
Seniia7 chapter 3 . 6/28/2020
they are cute
Seniia7 chapter 2 . 6/28/2020
it's me again, still stalking
Seniia7 chapter 2 . 6/28/2020
he's an idiot
Seniia7 chapter 1 . 6/28/2020
does hermione turn dark?
Alyce and Indi chapter 50 . 5/27/2020
I love these scenes! I'm not sure which one was my favorite, but I'll definitely remember Dolohov's. Knew something like that'd happen. (I so love the one with Moody!)
Alyce and Indi chapter 49 . 5/27/2020
So that's what Hermione added! Marvelous, simply marvelous. Heh.
Alyce and Indi chapter 47 . 5/27/2020
But...they've only got three chapters left. I know you're a great writer, but it still feels like not enough time.
Alyce and Indi chapter 45 . 5/27/2020
Draco's interactions with Harry and Ron are perfect. And Hermione is so clever. And oh dear, Lestrange is...well the word 'cuckoo' comes to mind, but at least he's happy.
Alyce and Indi chapter 41 . 5/27/2020
Hermione, you're always on the side it's "okay" to hate because you're always trying to do the right thing. You're braver than you know. Braver than most other people, fictional and real. It's a pity I'd have to break the fourth wall to tell you I admire you, but don't worry. The characters in your story will come around eventually. Some-like Draco and Percy-already have.
Alyce and Indi chapter 40 . 5/27/2020
Those witches don't know how stupid cornering Hermione Malfoy was. They're lucky they didn't find out.
Alyce and Indi chapter 37 . 5/27/2020
THEY ARE SO GOOSHY IT'S ADORABLEEEEE !
Alyce and Indi chapter 35 . 5/26/2020
Your stories bring new life to minor characters. I think this Arabella Figg, at least, would get along well with Patricia C. Wrede's Morwen. They seem quite similar, except Morwen is a king-lecturing witch and Arabella is an artist spy.
Alyce and Indi chapter 34 . 5/26/2020
I think-I could be wrong-but I think that occasionally, a male cat can be tortoiseshell, but infertile. If I remember right. It's entirely possible that I imagined it or misremembered.
Alyce and Indi chapter 25 . 5/26/2020
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