| Reviews for The Pretense |
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   Seniia7 chapter 2 . 6/28/2020 he's an idiot |
| Seniia7 chapter 1 . 6/28/2020 does hermione turn dark? |
| Alyce and Indi chapter 50 . 5/27/2020 I love these scenes! I'm not sure which one was my favorite, but I'll definitely remember Dolohov's. Knew something like that'd happen. (I so love the one with Moody!) |
| Alyce and Indi chapter 49 . 5/27/2020 So that's what Hermione added! Marvelous, simply marvelous. Heh. |
| Alyce and Indi chapter 47 . 5/27/2020 But...they've only got three chapters left. I know you're a great writer, but it still feels like not enough time. |
| Alyce and Indi chapter 45 . 5/27/2020 Draco's interactions with Harry and Ron are perfect. And Hermione is so clever. And oh dear, Lestrange is...well the word 'cuckoo' comes to mind, but at least he's happy. |
| Alyce and Indi chapter 41 . 5/27/2020 Hermione, you're always on the side it's "okay" to hate because you're always trying to do the right thing. You're braver than you know. Braver than most other people, fictional and real. It's a pity I'd have to break the fourth wall to tell you I admire you, but don't worry. The characters in your story will come around eventually. Some-like Draco and Percy-already have. |
| Alyce and Indi chapter 40 . 5/27/2020 Those witches don't know how stupid cornering Hermione Malfoy was. They're lucky they didn't find out. |
| Alyce and Indi chapter 37 . 5/27/2020 THEY ARE SO GOOSHY IT'S ADORABLEEEEE ! |
| Alyce and Indi chapter 35 . 5/26/2020 Your stories bring new life to minor characters. I think this Arabella Figg, at least, would get along well with Patricia C. Wrede's Morwen. They seem quite similar, except Morwen is a king-lecturing witch and Arabella is an artist spy. |
| Alyce and Indi chapter 34 . 5/26/2020 I think-I could be wrong-but I think that occasionally, a male cat can be tortoiseshell, but infertile. If I remember right. It's entirely possible that I imagined it or misremembered. |
| Alyce and Indi chapter 25 . 5/26/2020 Are you on FictionPress too? |
| Alyce and Indi chapter 24 . 5/26/2020 ...and voila, the scene is set for Dramione. My apologies. I'm seeing everything in terms of writing. I'm overanalyzing Avatar: the Last Airbender, examining Dr. Seuss' word choices (which are excellent, btw) and A.A. Milne's POV usage (1st, 2nd, and 3rd, all on the same page and all well done! He is incredible). Your story is intriguing too, otherwise I wouldn't have read this far, but I'm just getting too deep into Editor Mode. |
| Alyce and Indi chapter 21 . 5/19/2020 Percy really is a Gryffindor. Brave, but often stupid with bravery. |
| Alyce and Indi chapter 19 . 5/19/2020 What did Percy expect? I'd have thought he'd realize Hermione would choose to maintain her cover. |