Reviews for The Pretense
Alyce and Indi chapter 21 . 5/19/2020
Percy really is a Gryffindor. Brave, but often stupid with bravery.
Alyce and Indi chapter 19 . 5/19/2020
What did Percy expect? I'd have thought he'd realize Hermione would choose to maintain her cover.
elle chapter 50 . 5/16/2020
i still can't believe they all thought hermione betrayed them. well. all is well now, i guess. i just have to let it go. harry is still her best friend. she'd still stop at nothing to give him the life he deserves. peace in britain. think of england. moody deserved that slap yes. such a schemer.

i hope draco and hermione have plenty of children. and they be happy every single moment of their life from now on. may the rose gardens bloom better and better each year. and yes. fuck you antonin dolohov.

thank you so much for this enjoyable story! i love love love love it!
elle chapter 49 . 5/16/2020
yes. that's not how magic worked. but he didn't escape. in fact, he'll never be able to escape again. and that's all that matters. we all do bad things in war. we aren't proud of everything we do. but it is war. and we will do anything to win it.
elle chapter 48 . 5/16/2020
yes. let them know. let them know they've all been played. and let them drown in their sins.
elle chapter 47 . 5/16/2020
the four of them working together? man i never would have manifested this day but this is what draco deserves. the redemption that was snatched away from all of us.
elle chapter 46 . 5/16/2020
ah yes. aurors attacking civilians. much familiar. like what's happening here in my country. facism. so disgusting. we wait to rise as well. when people march, i will wear the best of shoes.
elle chapter 45 . 5/16/2020
well. if molly weasley really did that for her and hermione forgives all of them then fine. my heart's thawed already. i'd always forgive harry. but dolohov. dolohov i will never ever forgive.
elle chapter 44 . 5/16/2020
elle chapter 43 . 5/16/2020
this distracted me from succumbing to a full blown panic attack so thank you. the last chapter made my blood boil. i hope she kills dolohov slowly. i hope it's the same curse he casted at her in the department of mysteries. and then she'll freeze him. and burn him. and set the ashes on blue fire. may the smoke form into a phoenix.
elle chapter 42 . 5/16/2020
dolohov. you hurt her. you shite. i, on the contrary, look forward to hermione explaining that piece of parchment to draco.
elle chapter 41 . 5/16/2020
The bracelet worked. Thank god. I was wondering when that'll be put to use. Hermione will be like Snape. Maybe now people would start to understand. Maybe they won't. Well, they just have to enjoy their freedom given to them then. Fuck them all. I love Luna. I hope she's in Britain. I'm glad Percy's there to help Hermione and the Malfoys. Or the Malfoys in short, rather. Fuck Ron Weasley. Easy to be at peace, right? You're miles away from the war. We are at war. For as long as people have to fight for freedom and human rights, we are at war.
elle chapter 40 . 5/16/2020
Yes Moody would have castigated her for that for hours but would it make a difference? How worse could he do more to her than sell her to the enemy? LMAO but yes at least there would be no murder in that posh restaurant. Let the world burn when she wants to.
elle chapter 39 . 5/16/2020
Narcissa? Arguing? What a vision to behold. It made me laugh. Thank you. I love hearing Draco's voice in my head. Ronald. Safe in France. Not needing to make hard decisions. Get his hands dirty for things to change. I love Draco Malfoy even more. Will it ever end? Maybe one day my entire existence will be loving him.
elle chapter 38 . 5/16/2020
Well. Damn. Damn. She used the killing curse. Damn. No one can stop her now. I want to hear the sound of bones and muscles giving in to force. May the worms have a field days.
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