Reviews for The Pretense |
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![]() ![]() Hello! I have been re-reading your stories because they're excellent and I am soothed by the brutal way you overthrow a government. The things included in this one - trying to shame people in public, opinionated people who don't actually stand for anything, police violence in the face of peaceful protests - really resonated with me. They did the first (and second) time I read this, but it hit even harder after this past year. I love all the characters in this story. Hermione and Narcissa are so competent, and both terrifying in their own way. Draco is so loyal. Lucius made me laugh. Thank you again for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome. Loved it. So detailed and realistic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great read! Really enjoyed the manipulations and covert work. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I loved it! I am so glad I found this wonderful story. You are so very talented. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such heart wrenching, emotionally intense story. Not perfectly written, but a great read all the same. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol Harry vs Narcissa was hilarious. A fitting end for Dolohow. Thanks for completing this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! You're battle scenes may not be the most detailed in the fandom, but they get the job done just fine. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sheesh, how're you gonna wrap all this awesomeness is one chapter? And an epilogue but that doesn't really count. :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this chapter! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol bye Dolohov. I have mild to moderate faith in Percy. At least he has plenty of siblings to keep him in check. And also, I adore him. Thank you so much for writing this fic. It’s one of my all-time favorites ️️️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Have I mentioned, perhaps in a recent review, that I love Percy Weasley? In real life I don’t love a kangaroo court, but fictionally? Nothing is sweeter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m so proud of Hermione and Ron. She set a boundary, and he apologized and both of them were so nice to each other. I’m SO thrilled that Percy gets to be The Face of this rebellion. He earned it. ️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, Archie. :( Boys being boys means boys bonding over food instead of addressing the elephant in the room. |
![]() ![]() ![]() “ Narcissa and Molly were not that different from one another and both were enough like her to make her a little uncomfortable.” Three ladies who understand the value of breaking eggs in the process of making omelettes. I love all of them very much. Also, f*ck the police in fiction too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Things were going so smoothly, and then you hit us with THAT. I really really hope he ends up feeding the roses. |