Reviews for The Pretense
arlene chapter 50 . 3/29/2021
Hello! I have been re-reading your stories because they're excellent and I am soothed by the brutal way you overthrow a government. The things included in this one - trying to shame people in public, opinionated people who don't actually stand for anything, police violence in the face of peaceful protests - really resonated with me. They did the first (and second) time I read this, but it hit even harder after this past year.

I love all the characters in this story. Hermione and Narcissa are so competent, and both terrifying in their own way. Draco is so loyal. Lucius made me laugh. Thank you again for sharing
lakita2 chapter 50 . 3/31/2021
Awesome. Loved it. So detailed and realistic.
lovedrher chapter 50 . 2/18/2021
Great read! Really enjoyed the manipulations and covert work. Thank you.
Breedean chapter 50 . 2/17/2021
Oh, I loved it! I am so glad I found this wonderful story. You are so very talented.
InsideTheFridge chapter 50 . 2/10/2021
Such heart wrenching, emotionally intense story. Not perfectly written, but a great read all the same. Great job!
Animekitty47 chapter 50 . 2/7/2021
lol Harry vs Narcissa was hilarious.

A fitting end for Dolohow.

Thanks for completing this story!
Animekitty47 chapter 49 . 2/7/2021
Loved it!

You're battle scenes may not be the most detailed in the fandom, but they get the job done just fine. XD
Animekitty47 chapter 48 . 2/7/2021
Sheesh, how're you gonna wrap all this awesomeness is one chapter? And an epilogue but that doesn't really count. :P
Animekitty47 chapter 45 . 2/6/2021
Loved this chapter! :D
MaeBees chapter 50 . 2/6/2021
Lol bye Dolohov.

I have mild to moderate faith in Percy. At least he has plenty of siblings to keep him in check. And also, I adore him.

Thank you so much for writing this fic. It’s one of my all-time favorites ️️️
MaeBees chapter 49 . 2/6/2021
Have I mentioned, perhaps in a recent review, that I love Percy Weasley?

In real life I don’t love a kangaroo court, but fictionally? Nothing is sweeter.
MaeBees chapter 48 . 2/6/2021
I’m so proud of Hermione and Ron. She set a boundary, and he apologized and both of them were so nice to each other.

I’m SO thrilled that Percy gets to be The Face of this rebellion. He earned it. ️
MaeBees chapter 47 . 2/6/2021
Oh, Archie. :(

Boys being boys means boys bonding over food instead of addressing the elephant in the room.
MaeBees chapter 46 . 2/6/2021
“ Narcissa and Molly were not that different from one another and both were enough like her to make her a little uncomfortable.”

Three ladies who understand the value of breaking eggs in the process of making omelettes. I love all of them very much.

Also, f*ck the police in fiction too.
MaeBees chapter 45 . 2/6/2021
Things were going so smoothly, and then you hit us with THAT. I really really hope he ends up feeding the roses.
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