Reviews for The Pretense
dysfunctionaldilusion chapter 2 . 7/25/2017
This seems really interesting. Looking forward to more
Snowflake Dazzle chapter 2 . 7/25/2017
Thank you for continuing this drabble! I wonder how well the act will go and how Draco's information will help the order
blop999 chapter 2 . 7/25/2017
Hermione, my dear sweet girl, I feel your pain so muchI really want to see how this goes. I'm so happy you're writing a new Dramione! This is going to be such a marvelous story, I can just feel it sucking me in, like TWS did
notthedriver chapter 2 . 7/25/2017
Oh, a mean Draco! How delightful. Poor Hermione, being forced to leave the ones she loves, only to be taunted like that.
Top notch, you're great.
Wynterlace chapter 2 . 7/25/2017
Cute story
Leafey chapter 2 . 7/25/2017
I squealed when I saw that you'd turned this into a proper story! Thank you:-)
briallyson94 chapter 2 . 7/25/2017
As usual, completely beautiful words, I look forward to future chapters. Thank you for sharing.
Xasmin chapter 2 . 7/25/2017
Not how I expected it to go but I love it can't wait to see what happens.
EssTheDreamer chapter 2 . 7/25/2017
Holy shizzle ah colu only you have the ability to shatter me with my otp ahahahahahahah

Btw this is essthedreamer on guest because I'm lazy and wanted to review immediately
uhohspaghettiooos chapter 2 . 7/25/2017
Woahhhh this is awesome! I like the spin on the old, somewhat cheesy (but ofc I still read them because I'm a sucker) trope and love your writing. You rock and I'm using all my mental prowess (admittedly perhaps not as much as I would like) to will the trolls to BACK THE FUCK AWAY because we love you and want you to be able to share your wonderfulness with the world in peace. Thanks so much for sharing- it's currently 00.41 and I know you've already made my day xx
notthedriver chapter 1 . 7/25/2017
Ugggh I can't wait for all of this. great start,
bonafake chapter 2 . 7/25/2017
I loved the line, "They got moral righteousness and cold water baths." That was absolutely perfect. This is such an amazing start!
blop999 chapter 1 . 7/25/2017
Ooooohh, this seems like a dark one! And I love it :D
bonjour-its-m-e chapter 2 . 7/25/2017
Looking forward to more!
creelluka chapter 2 . 7/25/2017
Looking forward to more, thank you ️
~Creelluka
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