Reviews for The Pretense
briallyson94 chapter 2 . 7/25/2017
As usual, completely beautiful words, I look forward to future chapters. Thank you for sharing.
Xasmin chapter 2 . 7/25/2017
Not how I expected it to go but I love it can't wait to see what happens.
EssTheDreamer chapter 2 . 7/25/2017
Holy shizzle ah colu only you have the ability to shatter me with my otp ahahahahahahah

Btw this is essthedreamer on guest because I'm lazy and wanted to review immediately
uhohspaghettiooos chapter 2 . 7/25/2017
Woahhhh this is awesome! I like the spin on the old, somewhat cheesy (but ofc I still read them because I'm a sucker) trope and love your writing. You rock and I'm using all my mental prowess (admittedly perhaps not as much as I would like) to will the trolls to BACK THE FUCK AWAY because we love you and want you to be able to share your wonderfulness with the world in peace. Thanks so much for sharing- it's currently 00.41 and I know you've already made my day xx
notthedriver chapter 1 . 7/25/2017
Ugggh I can't wait for all of this. great start,
bonafake chapter 2 . 7/25/2017
I loved the line, "They got moral righteousness and cold water baths." That was absolutely perfect. This is such an amazing start!
blop999 chapter 1 . 7/25/2017
Ooooohh, this seems like a dark one! And I love it :D
bonjour-its-m-e chapter 2 . 7/25/2017
Looking forward to more!
creelluka chapter 2 . 7/25/2017
Looking forward to more, thank you ️
~Creelluka
Xasmin chapter 1 . 7/25/2017
I loved this. This is great :) can't wait to see how it turns out.
bonafake chapter 1 . 7/25/2017
This was such a wonderful start! Ron was kind of hilarious, in a messed up way. "I hate him." That might be the most Ron thing I've ever read. Amazing. I can't wait to see what comes next!
jellobellybean chapter 2 . 7/25/2017
What a lovely surprise! I'd just finished reading every single one of your fics again too:)
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