Reviews for The Pretense |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story was SO FREAKING GOOD! Thank you for sharing it with us! |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing story! but then again all your stories are ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for making me laugh even in the worst periods of my life. That part where Hermione and Lucius agree was just the thing I needed! Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Draco, just want to hug him and Hermione the last bit had me cracking. |
![]() ![]() ![]() huh. Draco the twat, poor Hermione, yoir better then Ginerva, in my opinion. wow, already hooked. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oooo. This is an interesting plot, Ron cry a river mate lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another wonderful and satisfying story about Hermione and Draco, et al. Your attention to detail in your stories is superb. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() “perfect, horrified accord” - Excellent, hahaha... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great writing style throughout - can’t stop reading! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Intriguing storyline... |
![]() ![]() ![]() The first time I started on this story was as you were first posting and I remember keeping up like the chapters were some kind of addictive drug (just like all of your docs are) but life got in the way and I had to shelve pleasure reading of any kind for quite a while and it really was the worst. So, I soon as things cleared a bit and I finally got to dive back into fics I knew IMMEDIATELY that this was what I was starting with. I can’t tell you the relief and giddiness of skipping to the last chapter first thing and seeing “the end” I sat down just now and read it straight through! It’s wonderful and I just wanted to say thank you for always creating this wonderful stories, I’ve been a fan for so long and I hate that I had to take break, and I know sometimes you may wish that you could, but it so nice being able to come back to the worlds you create. They feel kind of like home when I think of HP! Bravo |
![]() ![]() ![]() damn... you didn't include dear lucius in the ending... thank you for writing! i loved this one too ️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh... i want to see lucius' reaction when he sees them all waiting for biscuits |
![]() ![]() ![]() yeah, fuck them! they don't deserved her |
![]() ![]() ![]() you talked about spotted dick in anotjer story and i don't know what that is and i'm sooo curious, but so afraid to search |