I don’t know if you’ll still read this review but omygod I love how you write everything. My eyes are glued to the words! Love this!

Holy fuck I think I just watched the most beautiful movie ever

I'm gonna move to tumblr for the complete version :D

Hmmm... intriguing...

Thank you for writing this story! Please always be well and inspired.

Only one comment for consistency: Sakura already took Sarada back in her arm and slapped Sasuke with her free hand. And then, “Sarada begins to fuss in Sasuke’s arm, and they both fall silent once more…” I think you meant Sakura’s arm? Or maybe Sasuke’s because “he clenches his fist against the swaddled form of his child.” Sorry, I was trying to build the image in my head. Everything else was beautiful

No, but it makes sense that she wouldn’t be here and that the anime fight isn’t described in full. I like this pace.

Thank you for giving her a good fight!

So exciting! I read this accompanied by the Cinematic Ambiance playlist on YT and it felt even better. I could imagine their motions so telling, the action shots, the emotions playing through the miniscule movements… I bet that I could even without the background music.

So far, so good. The steamy scenes on AO3 are also commendable; they don’t feel random, forced, or out of place. Glad that you didn’t totally do away with them here on FFN

I have a feeling that this will be added to my list of favorites soon. The action sequence was phenomenal.

Beautiful beautiful storytelling and you are a GOAT SS WRITER. I love SasuSakuSara and Naruhina so freaking much and Kikashi and Tsunade and Itachi.

One of my all-time favourite fics.. Story flows like a movie, every chapter was intriguing and world building was perfect.. Thank you for posting this.. All your fics are awesome...

Interesting love it though

It's a great fic, I had to look for the hot parts on tumblr and even though I almost took a step back with the profile description (I don't share some personal opinions). In the end I was able to find the story (I don't know how to use tumblr either so I lost lol) omitting the rest, I love sasusaku, You managed the personalities very well and Thanks for the samurai theme, it's hard to find. I'll add this to favorites.

Excellente fiction, à lire absolument !