Reviews for Harry Potter and the Critical Game
Latarra chapter 1 . 11/25
Very good.
ChocoLollie chapter 33 . 4/30
I'm kinda sad that over time it kinda just became a time travel fix it instead of the litrpg I thought it was meant to be
Totality Of The Blest Darkness chapter 17 . 2/10
First of all, in Europe. You don’t tend to see a separation of the powers of government or checks and balances. You are confusing the United States system of checks and balances with the (mostly) European (and Canadian) parliamentary system. In which the people vote for a party and the legislature picks the prime minister.
Totality Of The Blest Darkness chapter 10 . 2/10
Have you even read the damn the book! Harry’s name is NOT HAROLD, IT’S HARRY JAMES POTTER!
MyLifeIsUtterShit chapter 3 . 12/12/2022
:000 yasss, fix hogwarts! maybe harry can do something to help with the hogwarts houses?
era-romance chapter 16 . 9/22/2022
hurray hedwig!
era-romance chapter 9 . 9/22/2022
no hedwig?
Brezer chapter 14 . 9/6/2022
kind of disappointed so far. he was worried about being around kids with a 28 yr mentality and he's acting like a kid himself
zubhanwc3 chapter 33 . 7/11/2022
I like the story. bit of a fan of fix it up stories that are relatively interesting. and the gamer trope, as long as it's not using the 'system', or 'dnd', or going way over the top, to the point of turning other characters into mindless npcs, is one of my favorites. so this story is right up my alley. hope you decide to continue, as I'm interested in where it's going.

I'm assuming that the main reason for the changes, is likely due to number 14, or maybe a different one, but he's my first guess. he's involved in magical Europe, which would put him in contact with Grindelwald, and in turn Dumbledore. and potentially tom. he could've failed, or just died early, given that the changes that he's made have negatively affected canon, at least so far, and I'm Britain specifically. additionally, I'm assuming that the magical theory book that contradicted a bunch of other theories, is written by him.

lastly, I think that one of the other returnees might be fleur, as that would be a reasonable beacon of change in magical France, given that their are only a handful of magical countries, and promoting the concept of a veela being equal to a human across other countries by increasing her importance and impact
zubhanwc3 chapter 22 . 7/11/2022
huh. kinda wish that the chosen flower was a lily. would've been more poetic
asifzq24 chapter 1 . 5/17/2022
nice story hope you update
MoinLeute chapter 2 . 5/15/2022
whats up with that much useless stats? trying to fill chps with stats or what?
junkstories chapter 32 . 5/4/2022
I'm loving the story. Hope there will be more to it some day.
Guest chapter 33 . 4/16/2022
Over 10 years of reading fanfiction and this is one of the most well made time travel/gamer/ fix it fics that I’ve ever read. Sad to see that it hasnt been updated in a while but happy all the same to have found it. I’ve read HP fics for a long time and this one carefully avoided the cliches and common plot contrivances and mischaracterizations that the majority of them make.

I’d gush more about why I think this fic is great but I’m not that good with words so I’ll leave it with this: thank you for writing this and making my day.
Efthee chapter 30 . 3/23/2022
i like it so far but i feel that it would be a very very long read and there hasnt been a lot of game interactions as other gamer fics.
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