I'd love to rob those purebloods blind

nice story but the whole conflict resolution when harry finds the truth and how quickly he accepts her back seems rushed

Unique concept but it’s kinda dumb when you know truth potions exist,
Or the memory reading thing, this would be impossible as well there’s no way madam bones would allow it either (unless she had dies at this time then that mute point)

Another entertaining story using the author's standard tropes. I liked the competent and believable Harry and Ron. Barty and Hermione were a tad too potent and lucky. There's no way Barty could have gotten away with so much for so long, in so many places unless he had a network of support (he didn't).

Barty was confined as teenager to over a decade of little or no activity. He could not do any magic in that time and probably wasn't even allowed to study it. Yet, two weeks after freedom from the imperious and *¡poof!* he magically becomes as competent (or more-so) than Voldemort?

The plot was coherent, canon-plausible, and rhymed with the author's other Hermione plots.

Good fanfiction overall. Thanks for posting.

you have made the luna elton john glasses joke twice. i dont remember which chapter it came in the first time though

While I can see you have a good story lined out, it’s way too slow paced for me. While some people may like the minute details of how the golden trio became talented, they are not necessary to move the plot along. Most of what you’ve wrote to this point could’ve been done with 60% less words.

You write great stories. Loved this one.

wow, this was an epic tale, I loved the 'to catch a thief' vibe, I could have used just a touch more misery for the Malfoys et al. but otherwise fantastic world building and plot :)

I loved this story so much!

exciting, interesting, unpredictable
thank you very much for writing and sharing it

Huh... Their roles seems to have reversed... Harry being bossy and Mr. You should follow rules and laws while Hermione being reckless and getting in as much trouble possible...

What happened to the Black ancestral manor in 1756? And what revenge?

Very entertaining fic. Thank you for writing

Ginny? Really? Ugh!

your stories are so nice! I really like that the plot is always central and interesting. with a few twist to the story you know you bring us a completely different story with as much suspense than the original. I could not put it down

He’s a git. A whinny pouting git who looked at women and girls naked without their permission often as a student and later as an auror, which is immoral and smarmy. He is ignoring that fact, plus that HG stunned the witch helping him and Ron catch Umbridge for the assassination attempt. He wouldn’t have won against Voldemort, Crouch or Umbridge without her help; total git. Kali