Excellent story...a great read.

Impressive story! Very well done!

... I can't tell whether Moody's speech when he first arrives at Grimmauld - when compared with the stutter speaking to Ron and Harry in private, though they arrived with him - is intentional or not. But it's driving me up the wall trying to figure it out without reading further. btw, fantastic story so far; I've really enjoyed reading it.

eh! I'm getting mixed signals here. Is Ginny letting Harry clap cheeks, or do they only make-out?

Thank you for writing this magnificent Story.

Well-written, engaging characters, and a *wow* twist to the usual Harry Potter Universe setting.

If I had purchased this book in a bookshop, It would have a place on my top bookshelf next to my other alltime favorites.

Jeanne is really stubborn how many times does she need told to believe that it not Harry's pride but trust thatvgurt him the most but I guess for her that's what would be worse so she expects it of other people

I'm going to assume that Sirius taught harry how to be an animagus now but that would have been helpful in the need to escape Voldemort. I was wandering why mrs malfoy had to heal her hand when they went down to the vault because if it was blood magic used to open the wall they never would have needed to open the vault

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I don't like how it ended! I don't like how self righteous Sirius's wife is , I especially don't like the fact that Harry is channeling his inner Suzaku kururugi for half the story ...

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ugh I wished Hermione had trounced harry. He sounds just as arrogant as he thinks Hermione is being Would have liked to see him get completely defeated

Your story was sooo intriguing, I loved reading it thanks for sharing it!

it was bloddy fantastic. amazing storyline interesting twists and plots. great job thank you! virtual hugs

I loved this story from start to finish! It was original and I couldn’t stop reading!

I am deeply disgusted by the fact that Hermione was expelled from the school and Harry and Ron did absolutely nothing to stop it. They didn't even tried to help her after that. I don't think I can read this story any longer on that account.