i was looking through this story and i saw in one of the chapter this peter compares Dr. Doom to Tony Stark and now we have a Doom played RDJ

This is one of the best work I've read keep up the good work

Maybe I'm weird, but I find it very stupid and questionable that at 16 Peter has already found "love for life". I think he should be getting as strong as possible now, because the hero kind of knows the future. At first, Felicia and Peter's relationship was cute, but now I think it started too early, and Peter should have developed himself more instead

Jesus this MC is a wuss, Fury just keeps using a bigger and bigger strap-on and MC just keeps taking it deeper and deeper up the ass.

Fury's entire argument is stupid, and that the mc follows along with it just shows how retarded he is... He deserves everything Doom does to him, fucking child

if you join us though, i promise that you wont regret it... Fucking lame, joining shield just to get fucked over later... This MC is a tool

I locked folder hidden deep within the files. I tried opening it up, but I found that it needed a security code, 10 letters, and not one more. I had one try to get it right.

CtrlC, CtrlV? Even if that operating system protects encoded files/folders from being copied that way, there are still plenty of methods to copy a file. If we’re getting technical, the very process of transferring a file from one disk to another involves copying the file to the second disk and then deleting it from the first.

Hell, if we dive a bit deeper into how file systems work, a file isn’t even truly deleted — the clusters it occupies are simply marked as free. That’s why files can be recovered (at least until they’re overwritten with new data).

Even if the Marvel universe operates on a fundamentally different file system, I can come up with a dozen more ways to copy that damn folder.

Retard... Going in his own suit... He deserves the outing Doom gives him. The beating too.

"I'm on the pill, it's fine."

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I looked down, I spotted a hint of blood around my cock, I had just taken her virginity.

!?

''I need to get my name out there in the public eye'' such a fucking child

He want's to avoid Osborn, so what does he do, he talks all smart and makes Osborn interested in him.
He wants to train martial arts, so what does he do, he joins what he knows is The Hand recruitment.
He is angry at MJ for childish reasons, so what does he do, he spies on her and follows her around.
He starts off with wanting to have nothing to do with hero work, so what does he do, he makes webshooters.
Honestly, Doom shoulda just killed him so the story could end there.

This Mc is annoying as fuck... no wonder Felicia left him

QQ...''They were doing this because of my actions.. WHAAA WHAAA *sniff sniff*

He is so childish

Redownload FF. Net to read your stories again. Just finished rereading Yami: The Kage Gamer and now this! Idk when you last updated, I forgot how to see that, but I hope you're safe and enjoying life!

I for one like that his heartbreak isn't immediately resolved.

Like it or not, Spiderman has always evolved from a point of loss, guilta sense of righteous responsibility.

The comic writers read this focal point of his character asIf we make him suffer, he's relatable, meaning more sales. Let's try and put him through every imaginable form of human suffering to make him appeal to as large a populace as possible. More sympathy, more money"

It's a sad progression when a character runs for this long, as with every comic character from the golden age, but such is the way of the world.