Reviews for The Spider |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Miles is too young probably, spider Gwen would make more sense. |
![]() ![]() Okay so I know you are way beyond this point and I don't usually review anyways but you are amazing and this story is spectacular. This is probably one of if not my favorite mcu fic out there because of how much depth and complexity you bring to the characters. No one is really 2D and I just love it. So ignore everyone else saying its bad because its amazing and I can't wait to see where it goes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why 2 years? People move out at 17 all the time lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhh kinda hope he dates both MJ and Felicia, those 2 are some of the best girls in marvel |
![]() ![]() ![]() im not sure a teens physical strength could even bruise spider-man with a punch lol. |
![]() ![]() Holy fuck, that's a whole bunch of smut, bro had a pen in 1 hand and his tool in the other. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think u need to go back through this chapter to fix some spelling errors. Its not everywhere but there are quite a few of them. |
![]() ![]() This story is a fucking shit. From the beginning to the end. Those who are reading this shit are mother fuckers. "Your aunt is a MILF, exactly my type" wtf is the first chapter bro, is something wrong with you or what. And not only just, his behaviour trough the story is childish, his comments when he is talking to a girl or a woman are like sexual harrasment, there are a lot of nonesense like having more than 1 billion followers, it's imposible to get that number, most of the social media doesn't have that much. If you are expecting a good story, with a non childish mc and common sense, serious, a good plot, then don't waste your time in this shit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why does it sound so childish? Am I wrong for expecting a superhero story to feel a bit mature? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the most disgusting work I've ever seen. I read until chapter 59 for 20 hours for what? For the sake of seeing this shit? This is not a work, it's just a dumpster. I hope the author is already dead and won't keep posting this shit. I hope you break your arms and your jaw, you bastard, so you don't write this shit anymore. |
![]() ![]() ![]() “My life was perfect” tempting fate dude |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a amazing story and you’ve cooked up, it keep me hooked thoughout the whole story! And I see it has been 4 years since the last update i hope you are doing well author, i also hope you can come back and continue updating this story but if not thank you for the experience and i wish you the best in life! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this fic, but your numbers are sometimes so far off base it’s jarring, for example 1.2billion followers? That’s an insane number. That’s more than triple the actual amount of twitter users, and 15% of the entire world population. On the same vein the Parker blood stuff would be worth farrr more than 20m if it worked as you described |
![]() ![]() ![]() HA! Should have expected a Variant of Hope from an offset timeline would be chosen. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What would happen when a random old guy came into a kid's room and the kid have reflexes of Spider man and the guy has a gun Believe me there is no such option called "talk" or "peace" ... The options will be how many bullets guy gets and if he survives... This was so forced... I mean what would you do... And don't say his SS didn't went off... That is such a useless cop off... Heck even without SS... The guy would be thrown out of the room without saying a word... The guy is a freaking asshole spy who is literally blind in one eye... But in reality totally blind.. which ur "SI" knows... Don't mix him up with the Legendary Actor... |