Reviews for The Spider
Bloodyredshade chapter 4 . 7/29/2017
Great story so far. Makes for a good read. I'm excited for the next chapter.
chris1901 chapter 4 . 7/29/2017
Are you still having MJ as a option or is she just scrapped I love the story and am happy to see black cat hope to see an update again
Thephantomprince chapter 4 . 7/29/2017
I'm liking this story so far, lots of promise. I always thought Spider-Man was kind of a ninja in fighting style, he just didn't embody it, so good job on bringing that in.
GayLegionCommander chapter 4 . 7/29/2017
I really enjoy this story. Keep it up
Rake1810 chapter 2 . 7/29/2017
Good chapter and I'm curious why you don't have Peter test out of high school. You mentioned it in this chapter and then kinda just moved on. That kind of intelligence would almost definitely get at least a partial scholarship. To be fair I never understood that in the comics besides for more time for awkward times in high school.
JOTECTGE chapter 4 . 7/29/2017
love it keep up the good work
zArthur chapter 4 . 7/29/2017
Amazing story. I have read all of your long works but have to admit I got kinda tired of Percy in particular at this point kinda feels like 10th season of Friends, still good and you want to see how it's ends but passion is gone and you don't care as much. This story tho is fresh and really interesting with amazing potential In huge and dangerous universe. Honestly 1 of the best Marvel fics I have ever read. Will be on look out for more.
AdaraCarrow chapter 4 . 7/29/2017
I went into this not expecting much, but dude, you knocked it out of the park, I really like this take on the MCEU and yes I agree Black Cat, and I would REALLY love to see Spidey and Dare Devil work together! All in all great story looking forward to more!
Heretical God Douluo chapter 1 . 7/29/2017
AAAAAAAAmazing fic !

You got me addicted, really good keep it up if this fic doesn't become a regular I think I'll make a depression. The only fault I find is the way let himself bullied without defending himeself or replicating with other prank. With his mind it won't be hard to do it without letting proof.
The Ultimate Balance Chaos chapter 4 . 7/29/2017
Just logged in and saw all four chapters love it
PasiveNox chapter 4 . 7/29/2017
Hmmmm it's gooood:):$:):):):):):):)
PasiveNox chapter 3 . 7/29/2017
Hmmm nice
PasiveNox chapter 2 . 7/29/2017
It's gooood
PasiveNox chapter 1 . 7/29/2017
It's goood:):)):):):)):):)
Guest chapter 4 . 7/29/2017
good shit. hope it becomes regular fic not just a couple of chapter on like some of your others. also iwould love to see an update for PJ the game story.
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