Reviews for The Spider |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, this is my second time reading this and I will say that eventhough Felicia's anger is understandable, it is rich coming from her considering what happened |
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![]() ![]() www. fanfiction s / 8778006 / 29 / Spidey-s-Life-is-a-Game You guys have to take a MAJOR look at this, it shows most of the women that Spider-Man had a chance with, in comics, and even beyond that...~Black Jeans-Wearing-Blue Jean. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so stupid |
![]() ![]() ![]() the hero part is good but man that personality. it's like how a republican or teenager would write romance. best wishes with your story author just doesn't suit me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() forget midtown high, it's getting to the point where they could rename the school hero high...or maybe make it float and call it sky high lol |
![]() ![]() Why did u stop the man of valyrian steel |
![]() ![]() Loved your story. Hope to read more some day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This has been one heck of a good story! Dang I am enjoying the way you are taking the story! Thank you very much for it and take your time. The muse strikes when it strikes! Fav'd! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...was that Rick and Morty? |
![]() ![]() So I have read up to ch 30, and while the author has started using incredibly shitty tropes that near-universially reviled, I want to draw attention to the human torch dating Liz Allen. That's super fucked up. As in, Johnny should be in jail for a pedophile fucked up. It's a mid to late 20s dude dating a 15-17 year old girl. That's incredibly predatory and weird. Very strange that both the author wrote it and that no one has called it out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Technically the HULK can have sex...Bruce banner can't. Int he Planet Hulk arc he actually becomes an almost dad. Right up til a group of bastards blow up the planet along with his wife and unborn child. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() are you going to add new chapters to this story, its a really good one |
![]() ![]() ![]() Maya Hansen is white in the MCU, and in the comics. Js. Pulling from a lot of different sources is one thing, but that's a really big retcon to try to justify the existence of hentaiheart. |