You are so creative. I would love more chapters. Perhaps a bet on the Colonel's love life is next... or Lady Catherine's behavior.

That was so cute!

I love that you made Lydia the hero.

Your warning was hilarious. The story is preposterous, but very well written.

Change 'accepted' to just 'accept'. And the phrase "even though it is rarely admit it" needs to be fixed. Did you mean admitted to?

Thanks for making me laugh!

Enjoyed this. How about Mary as the kingpin?

What madness! This is great stuff. Thank you.

I LOVE this. I like how your epilogues go together but show the different couples involved in the story. Maybe another epilogue could be about Mary and Kitty learning to game better, and whether Lydia wins her bet of making her husband General within two years. I also loved the imagery early on with the gallows.

It was very funny and so unique!

you are a delightfully silly man. i really think we need Mrs Bennett's wagering history, just how far from the hedgerows would her own gambling fortune have placed her? had she suffered a MAJOR loss, thus setting off her twittering about it, or was that all a disguise?

Hilarious! Awesome, beg your pardon FEARSOME! I haven't laughed this much in MONTHS! I adore this story and I worship your mind, which is scary! Please continue with this! Elizabeth teaching her children to bet, would be something I love to read. One remark though: it's epilogue, not epilog.

More! I mean... how rich are the Bennet ladies afterall?

This story was brilliant! I am adding to my list of favorites just to make sure I don't miss any potential epilogs. Wade, you rock! I think Anne or Georgiana need their own epilog.

You must allow me to tell you how ardently I admire and love the line about "not cut off any parts he will particularly need in prison". I laughed so loud I scared the cats into the library.

This was so funny that I had to retell the story to my husband who is hip by now with P&P fan fiction. Now about new chapters, what about one with Lady Cat? Let's make all JA women best at betting and winning. Why not?

Utter nonsense Wade!