Kudos? this isnt ao3 or whatever

His disgust of Voldemort lmaoo that’s hilarious

10/10 harry finaly got revenge
i love it
its just perfect and it has been teased so long that harry has wandless capabilitys
very well executed
"the hand that was holding his wand twitched" thats harry right?

idk that was weeirdly dramatic for little reason (but in comparison to the blunder you could have made and dodged i will ignore it and count it as a win)

im confused: the second harry steps in the cave he will understand its the locket cave from kreatures story. i mean...? i am rly confused. i can only see you play this one way: make dumbles injury worse then canon. which makes little sense cause in this fic he got injured LESS because he already had sirius have the same experience.
at this point i like to say: good job at actualy destroying horcruxes. in canon dumbles is just "harry hunt them but i will not tell u how to destroy one".
in this fic dumbles barely knows himself but already gave harry basilisk venom as tip

good thing they broke up
altho this was one of the few harmony relationships i was okay with/felt somewhat indifrent towards
most storys just force them together mindlessly and u cna feel it just happens because the author wants it to happen
its crazy how she completly ignored harrys grief over sirius. when she kissed him at the train i thought they had worked that crap out and she understood but then she reversed to beeing a bitch
there arent rly any girls left for harry to date tho (and since its a story of course he has to end up with somebody) but there are no girls that have had enough development/mention in the story.
it probably means harmony is still going to happen down the line. if hermione changes and stops beeing a bitch for real i have nothing against it but if she remains the same person she is rn then just NO

crazy how harry thinks he is the one owing the apology.
he lost a family member. anything he did is 100% understandable. and not responding to some mail? like comon thats not a big deal.
if i had pulled something like hermione id be single and rightfully so

i love the way harry bangs out random questions about his mum

a little bit extreme to base your relationship on the smell of a potion xD

harry not reminding the beaters they only got the position because of him is definitly a blunder in terms of powerplay and also in terms of giving an answer that is slytherin like cause its not an aswer at all. it reminds them of a sort of debt they have with him

smh harry doesnt know his girlfriend AT ALL. hermy isnt trying to dodge something with him. is he even aware who he is dating? like? she would behave like this weather or not she wanted to talk with him

its weeird how in the og books the profecy is established to be borderline meaningless and yet everybody obsesses over it and now in your story harry litteraly said "yeah whatever" already and yet somehow it is a big deal again xD

WTF HERMIONE IS SUCH A BITCH? WTF HE LOST SIRUS AND SHES... ngl just break up with her. what a disgusting move on her end. 0 tolerance/understanding for harry. he deserves better

first fic i read where harry is like "yeah u know what? fuck the profecy. that shit doesnt matter. it was always clear to me that either i kill voldy or die trying."
i dont like how it gets played like its this super huge deal in the books when in reality its not crazy new information, its not even new information at all. even if we werent the readers who knew it was going to happen. ginny said so in book 6 herself. she always knew he was going to go for it.
like dumbledor said: profecy doesnt matter and its only voldemort thinking it does that gives it any power. its completly irrelevant and tells us nothing new or even remotly interesting. also the bullshit about it beeing a burden is just such outragous nonsense. once i analized the books i realised how weak the payoff of the BIG SECRET OMG was xD

"those snakboxes they tested gave me a headace- its about to become a lot easier"

hermione doesnt realise they are no longer testing BUT SELLING them LOL her job is about to x10