Reviews for Scorpio Moon
Jana chapter 26 . 10/7
Loved it! Absolutely loved it! It was just so perfect! It portrayed Shikamaru and Temari soo well urghhh
I fell in love with them even more! Really wish they had ended up together though
April chapter 26 . 7/25
Ok but how did you muster the strength to not have them end up together :'-(

Beautifully written, and very in character of both Temari and Shikamaru. I am not trying to tell you how to end your story, but I suppose my frail hard didn't cope well. And the fact that I ended things with the guy I like because my family who needs me live in one country, while his future resides in another certainly didn't help.
Sky.demon.fox chapter 26 . 6/10
i loved it thank you so much!
JohnnyMommy19 chapter 23 . 5/5
Honestly, them arguing is perfectttt. While Shikamaru is super considerate of Temari's feelings, it makes sense that he doesn't always communicate perfectly with her. So good
JohnnyMommy19 chapter 21 . 5/5
I love the inclusion of all the Konoha shinobi! The writing for them is so natural and captures their personalities well
JohnnyMommy19 chapter 21 . 5/5
I didn't get the plausible possible grammar mixup myself lol
JohnnyMommy19 chapter 15 . 5/5
Nothing better than a will they won't they story
JohnnyMommy19 chapter 14 . 5/5
Loved the flashback
JohnnyMommy19 chapter 13 . 5/5
This is sooo good. I can't put it down
JohnnyMommy19 chapter 11 . 5/5
Thanks for the comedic relief at the egg bf. It was cut
JohnnyMommy19 chapter 7 . 5/4
Uh oh things are getting dramaaaaaaaaa'd
Guest chapter 4 . 5/4
Ugh they're so perfect for each other.
Guest chapter 3 . 5/4
You're so good at writing in the characters voices!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/4
I like it so far! The writing is good. I'm excited to see the more rough side a Temari. Also the Ino and Sai wearing the same crop tops was hilarious.
esther247 chapter 26 . 4/13
Ughhhh I'm hooked lol don't leave us like this, where can we go from here?! lol he confessed, what more can he do?
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