Reviews for The Mystery of El Jardín |
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![]() ![]() ![]() on chapter 6 and still have no idea what going on lmao |
![]() ![]() ![]() alice kinda sus |
![]() ![]() ![]() starting this fic. so far so good. did they enter another dimension |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love that this is a more unique story than we usually see here. I’m half expecting everyone to actually be dead, but I’m keen to see how you finish it. Great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa, what a doozy! Well, hopping over to next book which according to this is called The Mystery of Time, but your author page says it's The El Jardín Paradox, so I assume you changed it at some point! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So many questions but yeah, so relieved that wasn't the end of Edward! Luckily, by now, I know that's not your style, so I feel somewhat comforted |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man! Couldn't they even get just another hour or two with each other? You're cruel, girl! |
![]() ![]() ![]() 4 days? That's how long they've been there? Well, damn! I suspected Alistair of something, but certainly not that. Sort of makes sense, though |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a lot! So they defeated the sea monster, but almost drowned. Edward and Bella kissed, which was sweet, but how much did it actually mean since near-death and all. Then these new people came and Bella connected with their leader. Just wow |
![]() ![]() ![]() A sea monster? That tracks, I guess. This story is insane, but I'm not complaining |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that was all sorts of ominous |
![]() ![]() ![]() The place is wild! They're literally inside the volcano? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Huge mutations? Yeah, sure! Why not! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was one hell of an alcohol run, wasn't it? Emmett's speech was beautiful and turned out to be exactly what the group needed! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uh oh! Cracks within the group isn't good! |