Reviews for The Mystery of El Jardín
itdoesinmyworld chapter 6 . 11/5/2023
on chapter 6 and still have no idea what going on lmao
itdoesinmyworld chapter 2 . 11/5/2023
alice kinda sus
itdoesinmyworld chapter 1 . 11/5/2023
starting this fic. so far so good. did they enter another dimension
CosmicTwilight chapter 16 . 6/18/2023
I love that this is a more unique story than we usually see here. I’m half expecting everyone to actually be dead, but I’m keen to see how you finish it. Great work!
CameoMistress chapter 16 . 11/4/2021
Whoa, what a doozy! Well, hopping over to next book which according to this is called The Mystery of Time, but your author page says it's The El Jardín Paradox, so I assume you changed it at some point!
CameoMistress chapter 15 . 11/4/2021
So many questions but yeah, so relieved that wasn't the end of Edward! Luckily, by now, I know that's not your style, so I feel somewhat comforted
CameoMistress chapter 14 . 11/4/2021
Oh man! Couldn't they even get just another hour or two with each other? You're cruel, girl!
CameoMistress chapter 13 . 11/4/2021
4 days? That's how long they've been there? Well, damn!
I suspected Alistair of something, but certainly not that. Sort of makes sense, though
CameoMistress chapter 12 . 11/4/2021
That was a lot!
So they defeated the sea monster, but almost drowned. Edward and Bella kissed, which was sweet, but how much did it actually mean since near-death and all.
Then these new people came and Bella connected with their leader. Just wow
CameoMistress chapter 11 . 11/4/2021
A sea monster? That tracks, I guess. This story is insane, but I'm not complaining
CameoMistress chapter 10 . 11/1/2021
Well that was all sorts of ominous
CameoMistress chapter 9 . 10/30/2021
The place is wild! They're literally inside the volcano?
CameoMistress chapter 8 . 10/28/2021
Huge mutations? Yeah, sure! Why not!
CameoMistress chapter 7 . 10/27/2021
That was one hell of an alcohol run, wasn't it? Emmett's speech was beautiful and turned out to be exactly what the group needed!
CameoMistress chapter 6 . 10/26/2021
Uh oh! Cracks within the group isn't good!
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