Reviews for The Mystery of El Jardín
suzy 2010 chapter 1 . 8/4/2017
Good start to your story. Indeed where has everyone gone?
ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 8/4/2017
Reminded me of the Langoliers (sp?) by Stephen King. Only in his version the ones that fell asleep on the plane, were seemingly the only ones left on the planet. Everyone had disappeared completely. All of the other passengers, the pilots, everyone. One of the people that fell asleep knew how to fly planes so, he took the flight off auto pilot and landed the plane. With Bella's dream and that tranquilizer dart they found on the airstrip, I don't think they are alone. Plus, the woman with the scar most likely has something to do with it. Well, I am terribly intrigued.
CoppertopJ chapter 1 . 8/3/2017
Well shit, is Bella reliving an episode of Lost? Don't know what the hell is going on but interesting so far. And Edward wants to refuel and leave...hoping the fuel tanks on the island are empty. :D
Firechaseswater chapter 1 . 8/3/2017
I need this to be an ExB can't read any otherwise
debslmac chapter 1 . 8/3/2017
Looking forward to more
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