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Oooooohhh my gosh I am definitely going to head over to AO3 to read the full version because this was such a tease omg. I looooove the build up of this story and now that “it’s” finally happened, I’m internally screaming. Squuueeeee thank you for the update!

Ooooohhhh myyyyy gosh this is so good! Your characterization is so spot on, and I love the slow build. I know these chapters are long but I can't wait for the next chapter if you get to it. Amazing job, I'm in love!

oh ringabel. poor ringabel. guy can't catch a break. unfortunately, I was most definitely laughing at his expense. that scene was hilarious!

now edea...well, she's a lot dirtier than she let's on! girl needs to stop accusing ringabel of being a pervert when her eyes keep wandering south around him. oho, I'm sure she'll get a taste of her own hormones soon enough.

anyway, enough about that. thank you for writing this! I think the balance between the physical and emotional development with these two is perfect. I'm glad to see you still write Bravely Default fics as well; not many do. I'm excited to see another update whenever that may be! (ps. wrote this review on my phone, so I'm sorry if the formatting is terrible)

Ahhhh i love your writing! man i squealed the whole time reading this jfkskak JFKSKA you dont get much bravely default fics so thank you for this!

I just thought I'd leave a review saying this:

Excellent writing so far with this fic! I love how you left the last sentence of this chapter unfinished to give that sense of Ringabel nodding off into sleep, and I really enjoyed reading Ringabel's and Edea's interactions together as they try to cope with being snowed in a cabin with only each other. It's interesting to see them contemplating on what could have been, as well as wondering how Agnes, Tiz and Airy might be doing while separated from them. I think you really have Edea and Ringabel's characterization spot-on, too, as they start to kind of grow more towards each other despite the inner conflicts they have.

I encourage you to keep on writing! XD I will happily anticipate more of this fic!