Reviews for Percy Jackson, Lord of Time
kevinthegoat0304 chapter 18 . 8/24
Missing the epilogue but is was good.
kevinthegoat0304 chapter 13 . 8/24
You making him so weak. He doesn’t have to freeze time on someone, he can slow down time for himself or slow down his enemies or speed himself up.
kevinthegoat0304 chapter 8 . 8/24
Why didn’t he just swear on the Styx? Instant fix lol.
Guest chapter 10 . 6/21
Percy is perfectly balanced, as all things should be
Dreymord chapter 18 . 5/14
I'd actually be interested in a story with Nyx as one of the main characters - though being a primordial, she either needs to fall from grace or be a love interest or something, not interesting to have her just blow the opposition to bits all the time if she's the main character.
Fun story, by the way.
Lord Kronos1950 chapter 6 . 4/16
I busted out laughing when Apollo said "I'm taking your leaves bitch."
The Hellbound chapter 10 . 4/6
THAT CHANGE TO THE PROPHECY OF THE SEVEN! MMM! LOVE IT!
ID777 chapter 18 . 4/5
Is this done or...?
Great story, love the chapters and plotline.
AlphaKenny1 chapter 13 . 3/8
Mate I've been keeping up with your story but I am quite anoyed but this fight scene, I understand that Percy needed to loose to keep the plot going, but you can't have Percy freezing every Olympian in one chapter and then Percy only being able to freeze two, the figth scene made no sense, why didn't Poseidon get involve, why didn't Artemis, why did he took and 7 hour break between freezing Zeus and actually doing something. You could have figure out 100 better ways to have him loose the battle.
majikss chapter 13 . 2/26
did percy fucking rape hera in this fic! is that what yourr trying to tell me
yodadabs chapter 18 . 2/23
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

GOOD JOB :D DON'T GIVE UP ON THIS STORY EVEN THO I WON'T RETURN TO IT PROBABLY
Guest chapter 1 . 2/22
Nice
internationale chapter 18 . 2/10
ps2: i've just reread my post, i'm really sorry about typing mistakes, i wrote this on the phone and just messed up.
internationale chapter 18 . 2/10
this is actually one of the first stories i've read on this website, i'd say this is around a tier. there are just so many stories like this one, pertemisprimordial types, so it's extremly hard to write something that stands out. this story is decent, compared to certain really good pjo writer like salient or anaclusmos this might not be as good, but it is an great attempt to put more diversity on the pertemis fanfics, i read this really earlly, three years ago. i remember scrolling down so many similar pertemis stories and marvelling at just how many of them, this one focused on time powers which is actually new back then, so i clicked on it. the writing is decent and better the 90 percent of the pjo fanfictions, i was really sad that this story was unfinished and hoped that it could update soon, whenever i went to this website i would check out whether or not it is updated, finally, you updated this story, i hope that you would finish this quickly and also wish that you continue to write more fanfictions. you are better at writting then most fanfic writers and i hope that you will not waste your talent. as i said this story is one of the first stories i have read and made me stay at the website to discover other talented works of fanfiction.
ps. i am a chinese citizen raised in china, i have only been to the englished world for vacations, so my english is poor, so i hope that you can excuse my grammatical mistakes.
Ltbutterfly287 chapter 5 . 2/8
I can’t tel if your just really bad at describing things or if the meant for the armor to sound like something that looks stupid. Also I may have skimmed past a few things but I don’t really understand when Athena lied to him nor do I really agree with him being some temperamental cunt.
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