Reviews for Life as We Know It
lala chapter 22 . 5/17/2004
ok i give it an 8. its pretty good for a fanfiction, i like your writing style and i like that you tried to stick to the facts-
however, you neglected some, like sirius being best man at the wedding, peter having been a spy for a long time,james and sirius thinking remus was the spy- and what happened with arabella and sirius? wouldnt he have told her he wasnt the secret keeper?
But thats about all the critic i can come up with, the rest was written nicely, realistically and I really likes it!
can't think of a penname77 chapter 22 . 4/22/2004
Wow, awesome. I give it between a 9 and a 10. It was beautifully written, and at some parts I couldn't help but smile, but when Lily and James got together again, it was a bit abrupt. But I guess if they loved each other all along then they would be willing to get back together. Never mind, it's a 10. A friend sent me the link to Complicated Lives, and I loved it, so I was ecstatic to find your sequel, even though I discovered it a few months late. You are definitely going on my fav authors list.
Congratulations
RhiannonCat chapter 22 . 4/16/2004
Great! I love it. Perfect. I don't think I could have written it ay better. Bye
DarkenedFairy chapter 22 . 3/21/2004
This fanfiction was fantastic! Definitely a good sequel for Our Complicated Lives. Congratulations! The way you write is...is so extraordinary I can't even describe it. The last chapter got me really shook up. What with listening to Alkaline Trio's "Armageddon" while reading the last chapter, made me burst into tears again; and I'm not one for crying, very difficult for me to do for some reason. Again, congratulations on your great success with Life as We Know It!
Sincerely
DarkenedFairy
Jessie xxx chapter 22 . 2/1/2004
Aw truely fantastic.
Loved every word of it.
Lots of luv
Jessie x
Jessie xxx chapter 11 . 1/31/2004
Oh my gosh, You are a talented writer.
you describe emtions so well, What ever the character feels I feel to.
When Lily was heart broken so was I.
When Remus returned and the hole group was smiling, so was I.
Now James' emotion are sad and I feel sad too!
Can't wait to read more!
Luv ya
Jessie x
harrystwin chapter 22 . 10/8/2003
i'll give you a 1,0,0,0 just because it was way better than a 10!
Fire chapter 22 . 9/18/2003
Woww, i really loved ur story, ur a great author really. But i just cry everytime i read and L/J fic! loll why do they have to die! loll no really congrats ur great.

ciao
ChicaNoche401 chapter 22 . 9/14/2003
Oh so good!you rock as a writer!but ya gotta write more! stupid ppl at fanfiction...i liked our complicated lives! it was good! you cant stop writing! i would die if ya did! you havta write more james/lily fics! yes! more more fics!
KodachiSoul chapter 22 . 9/13/2003
NO! i can't be over, tears a rolling down my cheeks i loved this...although i thought that Lily and James would at least fight a little then just die like that but i still love it and give it a 10! this was the best fanfic i have ever read i really liked it
Tinki-chan chapter 22 . 9/13/2003
Awesome story... I give it a 9! The overall storyline were really well thought out, I love the angst between Lily and James! XD The ending was a bit abrupt thou... kinda sudden. It didn't feel like the end but it ended... am I making sense? -.-" Anyhoo, this story is definitely on my fav. list!
MandaB chapter 22 . 9/13/2003
aww...its over. That was wonderful. Both stories kicked total butt and i loved it. I'm so sad to see you finished with the stories but you did a wonderful job of finishing it up. Great job.

Lotta Love,

MandaB
LilyGirl2 chapter 22 . 9/13/2003
i loved it! a ten!
Tomow chapter 22 . 9/13/2003
Wow, this story was wonderful. I read it all at once. :3 I loved how you portrayed James. It was wonderful. No-they died! ;_; Ah well. I give you a 10. I liked how you changed Arabella to fit canon. That was clever. ;) I feel bad for her, though. Well, anyway, great job!
lily n' james fan chapter 22 . 9/13/2003
hey! i definately thought ur ff was a 10! it was so good and i loved reading it! thanx for a great story!

MARY
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