|Reviews for Life as We Know It|
| lala chapter 22 . 5/17/2004
ok i give it an 8. its pretty good for a fanfiction, i like your writing style and i like that you tried to stick to the facts-
however, you neglected some, like sirius being best man at the wedding, peter having been a spy for a long time,james and sirius thinking remus was the spy- and what happened with arabella and sirius? wouldnt he have told her he wasnt the secret keeper?
But thats about all the critic i can come up with, the rest was written nicely, realistically and I really likes it!
| can't think of a penname77 chapter 22 . 4/22/2004
Wow, awesome. I give it between a 9 and a 10. It was beautifully written, and at some parts I couldn't help but smile, but when Lily and James got together again, it was a bit abrupt. But I guess if they loved each other all along then they would be willing to get back together. Never mind, it's a 10. A friend sent me the link to Complicated Lives, and I loved it, so I was ecstatic to find your sequel, even though I discovered it a few months late. You are definitely going on my fav authors list.
| RhiannonCat chapter 22 . 4/16/2004
Great! I love it. Perfect. I don't think I could have written it ay better. Bye
| DarkenedFairy chapter 22 . 3/21/2004
This fanfiction was fantastic! Definitely a good sequel for Our Complicated Lives. Congratulations! The way you write is...is so extraordinary I can't even describe it. The last chapter got me really shook up. What with listening to Alkaline Trio's "Armageddon" while reading the last chapter, made me burst into tears again; and I'm not one for crying, very difficult for me to do for some reason. Again, congratulations on your great success with Life as We Know It!
| Jessie xxx chapter 22 . 2/1/2004
Aw truely fantastic.
Loved every word of it.
Lots of luv
| Jessie xxx chapter 11 . 1/31/2004
Oh my gosh, You are a talented writer.
you describe emtions so well, What ever the character feels I feel to.
When Lily was heart broken so was I.
When Remus returned and the hole group was smiling, so was I.
Now James' emotion are sad and I feel sad too!
Can't wait to read more!
| harrystwin chapter 22 . 10/8/2003
i'll give you a 1,0,0,0 just because it was way better than a 10!
| Fire chapter 22 . 9/18/2003
Woww, i really loved ur story, ur a great author really. But i just cry everytime i read and L/J fic! loll why do they have to die! loll no really congrats ur great.
| ChicaNoche401 chapter 22 . 9/14/2003
Oh so good!you rock as a writer!but ya gotta write more! stupid ppl at fanfiction...i liked our complicated lives! it was good! you cant stop writing! i would die if ya did! you havta write more james/lily fics! yes! more more fics!
| KodachiSoul chapter 22 . 9/13/2003
NO! i can't be over, tears a rolling down my cheeks i loved this...although i thought that Lily and James would at least fight a little then just die like that but i still love it and give it a 10! this was the best fanfic i have ever read i really liked it
| Tinki-chan chapter 22 . 9/13/2003
Awesome story... I give it a 9! The overall storyline were really well thought out, I love the angst between Lily and James! XD The ending was a bit abrupt thou... kinda sudden. It didn't feel like the end but it ended... am I making sense? -.-" Anyhoo, this story is definitely on my fav. list!
| MandaB chapter 22 . 9/13/2003
aww...its over. That was wonderful. Both stories kicked total butt and i loved it. I'm so sad to see you finished with the stories but you did a wonderful job of finishing it up. Great job.
| LilyGirl2 chapter 22 . 9/13/2003
i loved it! a ten!
| Tomow chapter 22 . 9/13/2003
Wow, this story was wonderful. I read it all at once. :3 I loved how you portrayed James. It was wonderful. No-they died! ;_; Ah well. I give you a 10. I liked how you changed Arabella to fit canon. That was clever. ;) I feel bad for her, though. Well, anyway, great job!
| lily n' james fan chapter 22 . 9/13/2003
hey! i definately thought ur ff was a 10! it was so good and i loved reading it! thanx for a great story!