interesting chapter

here's a clarification for my last review, why not do this kind of this for your harry potter stories?

eager for the next chapter

Looking forward to more of this.

Heh, I am really looking forward to seeing Anko's reaction when her counterpart and that worlds Naruto get down and dirty in the forest, he he he.

Uzumaki Fiend reaction please

Use my Scarlet King of Konohagakure story.

This chapter was good. Take that Kiba!
Rock Lee and Akamaru got laid before you!

Just realized it was last updated on my bday. Wild.

Awesome work please continue the story

return to hachishaku-sama, please

or, can you start the harry potter version of this?

when is the next chapter

next chapter please

pues yo quiero reasionen kisune su hija ocho pies memoria falla es uno estu ya donde akishukaku sama hija naruto eso gustaria los aldea hoja vieran magino reasiones me diverto solo mi boto mi opinion veremos final vemos esto otro casie no porta mucho disfruto este fanfic como no puedas imaginar

How about "King of Snakes" by heartofsmaug ? It's a cool story

Rewriting History from VFSNAKE

May i suggest a world where team 7 are all villains working together along with the rest of the konoha 13
Specifically
In this one due to naruto finally having enough of the hiden leafs shit he decides to leave and establish his own organization under the name dusk/yugure(as a parallel to his relative pains akatsuki teams name translation of dawn)
To make a world of peace by directly removing the corrupt people from the leaf And for specific reasons the others follow him cause
Sasuke because he’s genuinely angry at how the village has treated his rival
Sakura cause of the fact that in this timeline she had almost died by zabuza and naruto saved her so she owes him loyalty
Neji due to the fact that he is mad at how his clan saw naruto as nothing but a potential breeding stock
Hinata because she despised her clan for disregarding the man who defended her honor
Sai originally as a spy but defected from the anbu because of narutos motivations to make a better world one where people can live better lives instead of being forced into war even when sick
Rock lee because of the fact that guy told him to knowing that the hidden leaf wouldnt be safe for him knowing the corruption (also gai works as a kind of inner agent who provides info using his turtle summon)
Tenten due to the fact that her team was leaving as well and because of a past connection she had with naruto when naruto befriended kurama in this timeline as a show of trust and knowing tenten from having naruto talk to her kurama led him to the location of a valuable weapon pt gift to tenten as a sign of trust
Kiba because in this timeline he actually befriended naruto due to both having a similar interest in legends of dog like creatures(actually sage beasts) roaming the lands between the nations to the point the two hoped to one day summon one of these creatures
And shino because shino is an outcast in this world like Naruto so he emphasized with him(even if that wasnt seeable) and helped him out
Shikamaru and choji joined because they are essentially narutos best friends and ino originally joined cause of the fact the rest of her team did but also because of the fact that she kinda had enough of being seen as just a potential spouse for sasuke by the other villagers to the point of overlooking her capabilities so essentially she decided to go because of that
As for they get op long story short naruto uses shadow clone jutsu to steal, well a lot of jutsu scrolls and the others grab their family scrolls to keep training and for learning other stuff well one of the scrolls naruto stole was the one of the few scrolls for edo tensei essentially by sacrificing any shinobi that tried to attack them he basically summoned a legendary shinobi to act as a teacher and using the fact that there were 13 of them to get the dna required especially since sasuke couldve easily accessed the dna of uchiha and the others got help from previous deceased members of their family
Apologies if it doesn’t make sense
I wouldn’t say that the ships would be naruto with the females of the konoha 13 but you can do it i mean your the one writing the naru-verse fic no offense (seriously no offense i love this fic)
As for its name?
The Yugure 13

I vote for indomitable Fox

Naruto soldier of Konoha final fantasy