Uh oh. Who’s was at the door? And how did they find him? I thought the trail ended at Sirius?

Uh oh. And the letter for Draco was hilarious.

Why aren’t they focusing on getting Pettigrew and proving Sirius’ innocence?

Where has Harry seen Sirius besides in the tower that would’ve been opportunities for Sirius to kill Harry? I hope you update this soon. It’s so good! :)

Love that Sirius knew who Hedwig was. And if Hedwig trusts Sirius, then that’s that. Love this new Harry and Snape dynamic. I’m glad Harry is talking to Ron and Hermione again.

So it was Snape. But Harry doesn’t know Sirius is a dog. So Harry is none the wiser. Love Sirius accioing a rat. Where was Pettigrew though?

Oh shit. Pettigrew or Snape?

This was a nice conversation Harry had with Snape. But anything having to do with his suicidal thoughts or his behavior causes him to disassociate.

Poor Harry. Pettigrew will die.

Sirius!

So Harry didn’t kill Marge, but he is becoming unstable. He knocked Snape into a wall.

How can Hermione do Harry’s homework for him if they have to hand write everything? Unless she’s charms her handwriting to look like Harry’s?

I’m glad Hedwig’s okay. She loves Harry so much. Poor Harry has PTSD.

this story is so .. omg
hopefully you update soon orrr one day

You know almost until the end I wasn't sure if this story is just torture-porn, or if the author just didn't knew how to write hurt/comfort properly. Welp gues I got my anwser after Sirius was killed.

Thankfully I didn't waste as much time as I could, becouse I skipped a lot of paragraphs. And it really wasn't hard to do; for 82 000 word story, the whole plot could be condensed into something with fourth the word-count.

Returning to accusation I made in first paragraph. This twisted story consisted of Harry getting smacked around, being abused, feeling horrible, being in state of deep dissociation and having the whole world against him whenever things started looking better. All of this without any counterweight.

There are also other faults - not only in plot, but also in the rest of the story - but I really don't want to further waste my time. I will just say that in the end, this story is completly and utterly meaningless.