Reviews for Drool |
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![]() ![]() Tge Gryffindors are hilarious and love the Hermione and Fleur friendship. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fun story. Gives a whole new (but welcome) dimension to Hermione. One small quibble - boy's LEFT hand to girl's right, boy's RIGHT hand on girl's waist. |
![]() ![]() This was fun. Hermione should join Harry and Fleur. The new and improved Golden Trio! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Before you complain about the pacing, ask yourselves the following question: What would realistically happen if two teenagers, who are, to some degree, attracted to each other, are left alone in a room and spent several hours in the rather intimate positions of various dances? Never has a truer word been said. I always find it hard to believe when fanfic authors have Harry sleep in bed with half naked girls yet nothing ever happens. Teenagers do stuff and they often don’t think it through. |
![]() ![]() ![]() please continue the story |
![]() ![]() This was fun. Why do I see Hermione joining them at some point? |
![]() ![]() ![]() thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Would be an interesting story if continued! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great fluffy short story. Some grammatical issues, but nothing horrible. |
![]() ![]() ![]() please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good |
![]() ![]() ![]() It seems like Harry and Fleur are going to be an eventual couple, with Hermione giving Fleur the blessing. Nice story, keep up the hard work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It seems like Ron ruined his friendship with Harry and Hermione for good now, since he sunk to an all-time low by behaving in such a manner in front of Fleur. Hopefully, Harry succeeds in asking Fleur to the ball. Keep up the hard work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really good story! |