Reviews for Consequences |
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![]() ![]() Bro leave politics out of this, the left would be a lot more spiteful toward mutants than the right |
![]() ![]() ![]() God-tier hurt/comfort story. I cried, I laughed, I smiled. Impossibly evocative. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely love this story. Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool Story. I would have liked to see Ross go down though. alternate title: How Flash Accidently Ended the Accords, Reunited the Avengers and Allied Them With the X-men Giving the Universe A Chance Against Thanos... Maybe one day the little bastard will even write a book about it... lol |
![]() ![]() *Cheers like a crazy, happy nuthead* That was wonderful! You did a splendid job with this story, and I must confess that I actually became emotional while reading it. The ending was pleasing and wrapped it up rather nicely! You do a MARVELous job of writing SpiderMan/ Peter Parker, as well as the feast of the Avengers, I gotta say! If you’ll excuse me, I’m gonna go see if you’ve written a sequel! If not, I’ll survive, but I would DIE to read one! |
![]() ![]() *cheers joyously* Go Avengers, woo hoo! To this day, I with that there was a movie with the Avengers and the XMen in it. It would have to be a movie that took place before all the endgame stuff, though, because it’d only be good if ALL the original Avengers. (Y’know, like Tony, Steve, Vision, and Natasha.) This chapter was great (cuss words aside), and I really enjoyed reading it! |
![]() ![]() I swear, every time Aunt May internally calls Vision, “the purple butler”, I laugh out loud! It’s funny because it’s so RIGHT. Also, the doctor lady is right; Peter and May DO need some therapy. Big time. I really hope that Pepper never gives Tony the ring back. Tony Stark did make a big mistake, but he really is trying to make up for it, and he REALLY does care a ton about Peter. |
![]() ![]() Dawwwwww, poor Peter! I’m SO glad that he’s feeling better. I love the plot, but all the disgustingly harsh cuss words are sorta killing my joy. Plus, the words make it so that I can’t let my sisters read it. I’m a Christian, and as a rule I generally steer clear of all things that have cuss words in em. Cuss words are SO unnecessary and do NOTHING for the plot. Gotta love the plot, though; the only thing that could make it better is if Tony Stark and Aunt May both died and Peter had to move to Charles Xavier’s school for mutants. Just saying. |
![]() ![]() Man, you made me CRY! I hate all the language, but you’ve TOTALLY got me hooked now; I’ve gotta know what happens to Peter! |
![]() ![]() This is great! I didn’t like the brief f bomb, but I’ll make do. You’ve successfully caught my attention; I intend to continue reading this fic to the end. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. You’re really team cap aren’t you? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great little fic. Not usually for most MCU fic to be honest but finding a few good ones is nice. This is definitely one of the good ones. One of the best I have read yet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seeing Peter flirt with Wanda accidentally would have been hilarious. Him flailing to back track only to dig himself deeper. |
![]() ![]() Wow this was really good, like ‘my heart is pumping oh my goodness what’s going to happen’ sort of good. Congrats you’ve done an outstanding job with the characters and their development! |
![]() ![]() This is a TOP read. So beautiful, a work of art. Thus, my rage for how shoddily CA:CW was handled burns all the stronger. I can't believe how people hate fan fiction when there's genuine gems out there that transcend the awesomeness of the source material and even SCHOOLS it. I wish this could undergo a form of apotheosis and become a recognized alternative universe. This should be on an episode of the upcoming What If? I can see the episode title: What If... The Consequences of the Avengers' Civil War Were Explored... Competently? |