Reviews for Highschool DXD: The Masked Dragon Emperor |
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![]() ![]() Hope you continue this, is really good |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story has a lot of potential. I think the writer should go over it again or have somebody else do it so it would flow better. the flow feel a little off he keeps re-introducing characters he’s already done and the grammar or writing style I should say leaves a little to be desired. Otherwise, I enjoy the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was gonna try reading this but after reading some of the review. I concluded that this will only annoy me and generally not like it because of your inconsistency (that has been pointed) in both power scaling and plot wise. Now I leave you with a piece of advice don't drag out things that shouldn't couldn't be drag out in the first place in both plot and story writing and be consistent. |
![]() ![]() I can’t wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Also, the characterization of Rias doesn't make me like her in a slightest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Talk about inconsistent power-scaling, if this Issei with spiritual-power, reincarnated-devil's power and Boosted-Gear can't beat these two; then there's no conceivable way that Issei without the latter two powers should be able to fight these two for so long. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bro, why are you dragging this out? We all know that one-tenth of a Hollow's power is enough to kill Freed 10 times over. I hate dragging out plot-lines that can be solved under a mintute(and i'm pretty sure, i'm not the only one) especially since this Issei is way stronger than his canonical counterpart. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed all the chapters until now, I liked how you united some bleach elements with DxD and even followed the cannon. I wonder what else you have planned for the story, and even when the vasto lorde form will appear, and mind answering just this little question ? Will Issei get a bankai or something related (not counting balance breaker) in the future ? |
![]() ![]() ok this is making absolutely no fucking sense. Issei OBVIOUSLY reads/watches Bleach I mean seriously you've got him calling his sensing ability Reiatsu and you had him "perform" a Getsuga Tenshou to awaken his sacred gear so HOW THE FUCK WOULD HE NOT KNOW WHAT A HOLLOW IS? If you're gonna continue writing then STAY CONSISTENT |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yoruichi?! |
![]() ![]() Lady Maria much? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This reads weird. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hollow Issei seems more and more like a persona Shadow to me. I bet the key to controlling it is gonna be acceptance, isn’t it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() So is Issei gonna constantly get nearly killed because of monologuing after defeating one enemy? That’s gonna get pretty stale real fast if it doesn’t get fixed soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Real talk? Didn't expect this to be updated. But I'm happy to be wrong. Had to reread it and found the reason I liked the story. Now it's time for Issei to find the reason for the Hollow inside him and gain control by going to his subconscious and REALLY beating him into submission. Really like how Issei is trying to get a logical reason for still fighting and trying to break that. Will he eventually come to terms that some people are just too gone to even possibly save and redeem? Like a certain crazed brother of a Satan. Dude won't like what the prick did to Asia just so he could rape her |