|Reviews for The Cabin|
| Blondie B. Happy chapter 27 . 2/19
Such an amazing story:)
| Sam chapter 17 . 2/12
Ginny is fucking stupid
| Sam chapter 9 . 2/12
It seems Ginny is selfish and only cares about herself.
| Braeyden T Call chapter 11 . 1/20
I'm 16 I love this fanfic especially how cute and adorable Draco is such a sweet heart plese continue writing it seems as though your amazing at quit.
| Kayla chapter 27 . 1/12
Oh my gosh. This was absolutely amazing! It took Mr about a week to finish it. I l ove long stories. Dramione is my favorite ship. My otp. You made this perfection. I adore this story and I can't wait to read the manor
Thanks for being an amazing writer
| flithymudblood chapter 27 . 1/7
Loved it! Thank you! this will be going in my favorites. :)
| eyechange chapter 27 . 11/3/2013
Too perfect, love all of it! Thank you so much for this! One question though, through all of this it tturned out at the start Hermione was halfblood not muggleborn... why couldn't they of used that? Because the issue was he was dating a 'mudblood'? But brilliant!
| Courtney chapter 12 . 10/1/2013
Love this chapter. This is my favourite chapter so far...
| Courtney chapter 10 . 10/1/2013
Uhh. F-you Ginny
| Eilegna chapter 27 . 9/30/2013
Well here's my review: (spoilers ahead)
-You seemed to confuse the usage of Than and Then
-The plot readily gave the answers to the problems like one of them suppose to die but journal says not really.. It makes a person not to be on edge, it doesnt make them agitated it puts them at ease.. But anyway
-I love it that you incorporated Quidditch because it makes it like the HP novel.. Other fics just almost always focus on the character and skip these trivial things (e.g. Quidditch..) What i mean is not just mention Quidditch.. Others do mention it but its just practice or something.. You incorporated the actual
scenes and the actual match! Good!
-Your idea of magic is amazing.. The magical journal is so cliche ( it already appears in COS as riddle's) but you made it different by doing some sort of biometrics..haha that fingerprint thingy is good.. Though inwonder how wizards knew that.. I mean derek and esmeralda sort of lived waaay before right? But anyway partnering magic with a bit of modern muggle stuff is cool.. Advance science is like magic anyway.. So says Clarke
-The problem of apparating in Hogwarts was solved by the amulets.. Hmm.. Okay as long as it worked though in kinda felt unfairness to the other characters Hahaha
-The mind capsuling thing is cool, too. Entering once mind and being stuck and the way you describe it makes it somehow real in HP world.. Like it was part of it.. Sure there are lots of magic involving minds like reading minds etc.. But entering it? Heck yeah.. Kinda makes you wonder why JKR havent thought or mentioned it as one of the dangers in apparating.
-Draco holding Lex's dying gaze while smiling is creepy.. Hehe a bit of slytherin spotted there.
-It's a nice way you made the plot twist where the Malfoys arent really evil. You made them like Snapes.. Its a nice redemption excuse hahah.. Though Lucius sudden death feels surreal coz it's just like he's there, then he's not.. Oh well that's the killing curse for you..no explanations just drop death!
-Voldemort's death somehow looked comical haha but who can resist a huge amount of pain?
-Did you made up those plants? You do have a great imagination! The glowing oaks are just as if they're really part of HP universe.. 'mazing!
- I LOVE Draco and Hermione's sarcasm aand how Draco incorporate how he feels in his sentences as if he doing it unconsciously or innocently..
- oh and i cant believe Lavender can be sooo hard headed.. Facepalm is the appropriate non verbal response.. Followed by shaking of the head and a huge sigh..jeez im embarrassed for her hahaha!
- the double ended cauldron.. I still find it hard to imagine haha.. If you're using both compartments.. How'll you be able to stir the one at the bottom? Ehehe
-Lex called Voldemort, Voldemort.. In the books death eaters never call him by his name.. It's either The Dark Lord, My lord.. Or maybe You-Know-Who..
-I was under the impression that there are head boys and girls each house but then you said ignore book 5, so...
-I was kinda bothered by Dumbledore asking Mcgonagall's help because 'she was after all an expert in transfiguration'. Before Dumbledore became headmaster, he taught Transfigurations.. But then again its AU
I was a bit.. A BIT.. disappointed that Harry is almost oblivious to what's happening.. ALMOST.. He was the boy-who-lived after all, the closest connection to Voldemort, and Draco & Hermione kinda getting the credit to kill Voldy is somehow.. Hmm..stole the spotlight out of him.. (I'm just loyal to Harry hehe) But dont worry.. I get it that this is a DRAMIONE fic and not Harry's story. And it was compensated by Harry knowing a little about it. oh and I love how you portray Harry in here.. so him.
I was also bothered at first that Ron doesn't have any partner hahaha .. The other fic where I read Pansy being partnered to Ron is RZZMG's Eros and Psyche..and its rated M.. But the plot is amazing..
I also like Pansy's role in here
- hmmm what else? I think i need to cut it here, i have read the fic ages ago and procrastination made me review late.. And sorry if it's long.. Now i'll have to find a time to read the sequel to this..
Great job and Keep it up!
*marked as favorite*
| me chapter 27 . 8/16/2013
really nice fanfic! loved it! ;)
| always smirking chapter 24 . 8/9/2013
its a realy good story
| Mrs-N-Uzumaki chapter 2 . 7/7/2013
Hermione told her that it had hit her chest. Malfoy's eyes lit up instantly and he casually looked over from the bed he was sitting on, hoping to catch a glance.
"Fat chance you pervert." She told him, smiling slightly at his disappointment then turned around to show Madam Pomfrey so he couldn't see.
| J chapter 14 . 6/11/2013
I melted when he kissed her forehead. What an achingly human moment for our dearest Draco. I just love them.
| Lovely2b chapter 13 . 6/3/2013
Love the story line- but would be great if you could have someone fix the typos, i understand what you mean but the autocorrect has changed some words entirely. The conversations between the characters seem so fake like when hermione is with her parents or the weirdness between her Ginny, Ron and Harry seems so fake. I got through 12 chapters but couldn't push on through it although I was really interested in the prophecy etc