Reviews for Maelstrom of Cosmic Era
fireboy122arthur chapter 2 . 10/28/2020
I like it
fireboy122arthur chapter 2 . 10/28/2020
i like it
DallGod115 chapter 2 . 10/19/2020
still waiting for next update
DallGod115 chapter 1 . 10/19/2020
Oi big bro where the next chapter
Borello chapter 19 . 10/2/2020
damnit. i hoped to read more chapter. the story is really good.
Guest chapter 6 . 7/13/2020
Personally, I think you should have created your own Gundam using some ideas for past Gundams, I mean I like Barbatos and 00-Riser's Mobility, but Freedom had the armaments. You should have also used Solar Reactors or GN-Drives, they'd probably work better with his chakra.

As for the harem, I actually think you should have kept Lacus with Kira and had Naruto get with Meer, whom you could have portrayed as Lacus' sister. Personally, I liked Meer and Flay as well as Miriallia as characters, with Miriallia being the top, those three were down to Earth characters with real issues and real personalities. Lacus just continues the Gundam female protagonist cliche, she's basically just a new era version of Sayla Mass and Fraw Bow from the original, Fa Yuiry from Zeta, Relena Peacecraft from Wing, and Marina Ismael from 00, and while those characters are great (with the exception of Relena, who's annoying and ignorant like the dumb emo chick from Twilight), it gets boring and mundane when all the characters act alike.

Although Flay can be somewhat similar to past characters like Emma Sheen from Zeta and Wang Liu Mei from 00, she is unique, and has the most character development, which is what makes her such an amazing character. She would also fit well with Naruto because as everyone knows, Flay originally hated Coordinators and Kira is one, Naruto however is NOT a Coordinator but can still influence Flay to let go of her hatred. Also in reality the Flay relationship with Kira made no sense really, because her hatred for them, especially after her father's death, rose to the level of absolute revulsion, seeing the Coordinators as abominations. Even if she WANTED to use Kira for some sick twisted purpose, in reality, someone with THAT level of revulsion towards someone would NOT be able to pull it off, there's a difference between hating someone with malice and hating someone because they disgust you, the former you can push through your hatred to inflict harm on them, the latter, you probably won't even want anything more than to get away from them. So I think Naruto hooking up with Flay and helping her get over her fear of Coordinators would make more sense than her hooking up with Kira.

Also, I don't see Naruto getting with Lacus, I don't even see how they could meet. I do see him hooking up with Meer, plus unlike Lacus whom has that ignorant Relena vibe going, Meer is more like an average bubbly young woman whose into celebrities and fashion, to me she's more fun.

Miriallia is just the shit... nuff said.

You could also include other Gundam girls, despite my comparison of Lacus to Sayla, I like Sayla Mass, especially her depiction in Origins, and she would make a good addition to his harem, not to mention Lalah Soone and Crowley Hamon, I can see Naruto having done like Char with the former and saved her from slavers, while I can also see Naruto being a regular of Crowley Hamon at the nightclub she attends. Also Newtypes can fit into the CC timeline since Newtypes are really just normal humans whom developed spatial awareness from living in space, hence why they're called Spacenoids, and SEED hinted at both Rau le Creusset and Mu La Flaga being Newtypes with their ability to sense each other due to the cloning. Wang Liu Mei from 00 would make a good addition as an informant of Naruto, and if you need a blonde in the group, there's Louise Halevy, although my two favorite 00 characters are Anew Returner and Nena Trinity, whom can make good Coordinators (although I also like Christina, but I think you got the brunettes down with Murrue and possibly Miriallia). As for Natarle... replace her with Lucrezia Noin, Lucrezia's got the seductive military chick thing going, but is not as stiff as Natarle, plus she's fiercely loyal to Zechs Marquis (who is like one of the ultimate Bad-Asses of Gundam behind the second Lockon Stratos).
Guest chapter 19 . 12/15/2019
Please continue the work on this st
Guest chapter 19 . 11/19/2019
I have read both thos and the rewrite version of it and to be honest this is the better version. To me it feels lime you have put more emotion more thought and soul into it through the first page compared to the rewrite. To me the rewrite is just basically saying whatever fuck off I own the bitch' I mean come on there was more to the original then the rewrite I mean I get the differences but the rewr8te doesnt make that much sense I love how you included the other gundam series through here but you should also include things other then gundam I would say maybe mine I from kabaneri of the iron fortress if only for the reason she would be with naruto due to is blood being sweet to her and also over time she gained his immortality. Also I would make it so only if he and his love interests (plural) wanted immortality he could give it but he would talk about the risks and pros and cons maybe also included a few other characters from other anime s just my opinion anyway thank you and god bless america
danielkeanumadegani chapter 19 . 4/21/2019
it's ok i will waiting to reading this fic
REVANOFSITHLORD chapter 19 . 4/21/2019
to bad i was waiting Naruto meet Luger and her team
Gundam Meister Uzumaki chapter 2 . 4/20/2019
do you know someone who could come up with a naruto x Gundam build divers xover?
welltall44 chapter 19 . 4/20/2019
I would at the very least request that you don't delete the old version as I know that many people enjoy rereading the old version simply to compare how things have changed, especially for a fic with this many chapters. That being said have you considered having Naruto's Gundam be the Shining and later upgraded to Burning Gundam. I imagine you could use the whole Mobile Trace System and how the cockpit is controlled by the actual movement of the piolet as a more useful method of control for someone like Naruto. Hell, you could have the system be a unique one that allows Naruto to channel his chakra into the Gundam itself and the system then magnifies the chakra's quantity or output so that the Gundam can use larger versions of Naruto's normal attacks. Furthermore, the Super/Hyper modes could be when Naruto uses his Chakra Cloak or something like that. Just an idea for consideration.
ericsofly2 chapter 19 . 4/20/2019
Sad that you had to rewrite the story but I'm glad that I can continue to read this amazing story and the rewrite
Bigjo21 chapter 19 . 4/20/2019
I would like to see Naruto pilot the XXXG-00W0 Wing Gundam Zero (aka Wing Zero)
xconan25x chapter 19 . 4/20/2019
Ok. I hope you retain of Naruto's Immortality, Gundam, Intellect, Charisma and Godhood and have a detail lemon and harem atleast once every 3 or 5 chapter. Tiwala lang. Laban Pilipinas haha.
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