Totally awesome! I almost squealed like a girl at the end scene with Shoto and Momo.

This is really well-written. It’s good to show the duality, or rather, complexity, of human life instead of only showing the sappy and fluffy stuff. I can’t wait for the next chapter. Maybe a bit more ShoutoxMomo next time? Haha. Great job!

Been meaning to read this chapter for awhile, sorry about that.
I liked the cute moments between Midoriya and Ochako, I'm a sucker for fluff. (It really kills my street cred, but whatchya gonna do?)
The drawings of him done by Ochako were great too. Especially the one with Toshironi in his normal form, it just fits so perfectly with the anime right now. Great job.
Excited to see Midoriya starting to heal, it hurts seeing my favorite characters hurting like that.

As always I enjoyed the chapter and I can't wait until the next update.
Have a great rest of the week.
Hephaestus

aw heck, that was a great chapter! I think you were able to describe things well, especially Deku's depression afterwards, it takes a lot of skill to write that well. I'm sad to hear that there might not be one next month, but just know that all us readers will be waiting with baited breath! Keep up the good work!

Bro I'm trying not to cry! You're so good at writing! Keep it up!

Perfect. No other words can fit this chapter.
I’m glad you both addressed, but didn’t drag out Izuku’s depression. You depicted it pretty realistically and hopefully, the pacing of his recovery stays stable.
Can’t wait for more Izocha fluff! Happy writing! _

Im not crying, your crying!

I really liked your story and i hope you keep up the good work.

I... read all 11 chapters at once and laughed so much. And now it's taking everything to not cry... I didn't expect this when I began I... can't wait for another chapter. Following. Please update soon. :)

FYI: I'm joking and not upset, sarcasm doesn't really work in writing so don't get mad. :)

You little piece of... first you psych us out with that opening - which made me almost loose my shit, by the way, almost shedding a manly tear - then again with that ending! OMG I just want to strangle you for making me cry like a little girl, yeah, I admit it. Lol.

You're ending was amazing. It was so... fitting for Toshironi. He deserves better but as we all know, he unfortunately won't get it. Man, I am NOT looking forward to his death in the manga and later in the anime. Manly tears will be shed that fateful day.

But in all seriousness, this chapter was great, you did psych me out in the beginning, when I opened the page my eyes instantly glanced to the word 'grave', I hadn't even read the chapter title and stuff yet and I was almost in tears.
To be honest I didn't really like the fake out, I don't have a HUGE problem with it but I just never really liked that kind of thing. But whatever, it didn't really take anything from the chapter and it did give us a look into Midoriya's mind for just a few moments, which I liked. Man, this is gonna hit him and the others hard, a little part of me doesn't want to see it because I don't like seeing my favorite characters like that, but I have to. Which sucks.

Been meaning to read this chapter for awhile but glad I finally did. It was amazing. I can't wait until the next chapter and have a great weekend.
Hephaestus

Remembering highschool the cliques the teach the crew the struggle just gets harder so now enjoy all of your youth/ it's simple... Okay! we'll live another day this is another phase that soon will reach it's ennnnnnnd (Young Hearted KindsSIYR)

I’m shook after reading 11 chapters we need more fics like this looking forward to chapter 12

So I just found this yesterday binge read it. Fantastic work and man that last chapter got me

It's very good. Keep it up.

I'm crying. You wonderful monster.