|Reviews for Fate of Kings! Plus Lancer|
| guest chapter 6 . 2/17
plsssssssssssssssssssssss continue this fanfic ! this is great so far!
| Dreiundzwanzig chapter 6 . 12/11/2017
This story is freakin' amazing. I can't wait to see more.
| Zoomer chapter 3 . 11/1/2017
Zoomer has enjoyed this story so far, Zoomer demands. More. Chapters! But Zoomer is patient. Too patient.
| FluffySheepLion chapter 6 . 10/29/2017
Oooooh. It honestly confused me with the characters i didn't recognize. I thought you were using a cast of OCs, which isn't entirely wrong, but seeing this fic during the generation before RWBY was an interesting choice and i like it.
| NoahTheNerd chapter 6 . 10/12/2017
Please please please give us some fem-Gil x Arturia.
| LockeBelmont chapter 1 . 10/11/2017
You killed me, this so funny. I demand explosions just for the lulz. Also, thank you for this amazing prolog.
| Prismatic Glaive chapter 6 . 8/31/2017
This can only end in flames... and explosions...
| Fall2Glory chapter 6 . 8/30/2017
Being Lancer and Saber is suffering. Also, goodie this is around team STRK's timeframe... if this continues to canon will other Servants appear?
| Im a guest chapter 4 . 8/29/2017
| ultima-owner chapter 6 . 8/29/2017
good team name. the suffering is amusing
| amerdism chapter 4 . 8/27/2017
Awesome story, when's the next chapter going up, I hope to see more soon.
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/26/2017
I honestly don't get why Typemoon fans always prefer to use "Iskander" rather than "Alexander". His macedonian name should be much more accurate and should rightfully be used more.
Also, "Alexandra" sounds a lot better than "Iskandra".
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/24/2017
Lancer can't catch a fucking break! Like, holy shit, THREE times he's had to go against his honor in SIGNIFICANT ways!
I hope you give him some happiness later...
| ArcherReborn2 chapter 5 . 8/24/2017
This has been a surprisingly decent story and so far all the Fate characters seem to be in character. Its a very interesting premise although I am curious to see how you plan to balance out the power levels.
I wonder if there will be any romance between the heroes? I personally suggest against it, I can't really see the heroes being more than frenemies with each other to be honest. Although I suppose its all in the execution.
One little nitpick I have is that you seem to just handwave Diamurd's training. It is my opinion that he wouldn't really need a training instructor. Most of what he would need would just be physical to get into good enough shape to show his skills.
Finally, will the RWBY cast be in this as well or are the heroes going to be replacing them completely?
| Enderhunter991 chapter 5 . 8/24/2017
Is Diarmund replacing Whitley, or he still there? All in all, if it is Jaques Schnee that was his father, than it will be interesting to see how he interacts with Weiss.