|Reviews for He Was Suffocating|
| shiki94 chapter 1 . 8/18/2017
I don't think you need to apologize for how this story turned out. I think it turned out quite nicely, dear. :)
I've always wondered how Nemo would've felt after his escape from the dentist's office after Gill helped him escape. The duo (or any of the other aquarium fish, for that matter) never saw each other again, so I'd imagine that there was quite a bit of worry about how everyone was doing. So, the fact that Nemo has worries about how Gill's doing does a lot to show how much of an influence and help the older fish was to Nemo...which I feel you did a great job of showing here.
Great job on the story as always, dear. Sorry it took me so long to get to this, so I hope my review makes up for my lateness. :)