now i hate Raven

Ok, this is stupid, straight up

I just hope this doesn't have Yuri

I hope you have the balls to kill Raven when the time comes, no forgiveness, she ruined his life.

yeah i don't like any of the characters really, they're all pretty annoying

continue with this story please it's really cool I really loved this story please :)

I'm waiting for the continuation of the story.

So finally read through and i gotta say what. What happened it started off kinda fun and goofy. The end is just insane. Like why. Way to much lemon. You dk you but like damn. Sharp turn from fun Rom Com buts to just staight up lemon around 40 chapters in

Glad to have you back mate, hope for more chapters in the future.

It has grammatical/spelling flaws, but it looks neat.

ngl this shit with blake plot line is really killing the story for me your story is soild interms of plot and how you been developing it at least so far ove read but its a hard slog to push pass at least with the other girl romantic plot line are intresting and can be reasoable blake just feel hypocritical obessive ex litteraly a girl version of adam just less killing lol
but i get if thats the point you're making with her character, but it feels like there is no real karama for her behavior she feels bad for a moment hear cat ears go down and she acts sad whem shes a major part of the problem im hoping this is address with the story sooner rather then later and not just get weep under the rug

wow

ooh boy

Can't wait for Cinder to get exposed, she just really annoys me

this story never fails to get a giggle out of me, the misunderstandings and situations jaune gets into are just too funny