Reviews for Duplicity
Twifan1228 chapter 33 . 6/19
Mercy me. I just had to reread this fic again. Cheryl you’re an amazing writer so very talented!
Guest chapter 6 . 5/4
Guest review: I am truly disgusted at this chapter. It’s like the author just skipped over Bella being raped to “oh, she’s pregnant and of course she’s gonna keep it because she’s a good girl” I kind of questioned the authors view due to her repeated treatment of Alice(a decidedly more modern and feminist leaning character) in her stories but this takes the cake

Sunshine’s reply: I’m sorry … what? Did you miss the part where Bella asked for the morning after pill? And as far as Bella was concerned, she wanted to pretend it hadn’t happened. “If I don’t remember it, it didn’t happen.” For this story, the way Bella’s assault was handled fit. These characters aren’t going to run to the police or seek therapy or counseling for something like this. And guess what, not all people in real life do, either. Beyond that, I won’t argue with you the point of how it was addressed in the story, because that would be pointless. You’ve come to your own conclusion, no matter how baseless it is.

Bold of you to assume my stance on anything. And what are you talking about, “her repeated treatment of Alice in her stories”? What am I missing? Or have you forgotten that this is fiction, a story written about fictional characters, and in no way reflects my personal opinions on anything? This obviously isn’t the story for you, and since you perceive my “repeated treatment” of Alice as distasteful, I’ll kindly suggest you move along and find other authors with stories more suited to your tastes. Thanks!
ugabrattwilighthottie chapter 10 . 3/13
Stupid Jasper!
ugabrattwilighthottie chapter 9 . 3/13
Just get rid if the junkie Edward.
ugabrattwilighthottie chapter 5 . 3/13
I am appalled that Jasper is still breathing. What he did is one of the worst things a person can do to another person, let alone a teenage girl.
Chomping at the FanFic Bit chapter 29 . 11/29/2023
Poetic Justice :)
Denij chapter 31 . 10/9/2023
I'm sorry to say I was not interested in this story based on the summary. Now I could not wait to get home to continue reading your exciting, dramatic story. Awesome job.
Denij chapter 30 . 10/9/2023
WTF!
Denij chapter 21 . 10/8/2023
Sick... justice. Yeeah.
Just Sus chapter 21 . 9/12/2023
Well, that was quite brutal, but well deserved!
Just Sus chapter 16 . 9/11/2023
Oh, no...I don't like where this is going with Bella. Is she going to play both sides, or what? If she does this, I fear it won't end well!
Just Sus chapter 15 . 9/11/2023
I'm happy she didn't freak out. They're in love! Wonder what the rest of the family will think? Especially Daddy C?
Just Sus chapter 14 . 9/11/2023
WOW, it's about time! I bet this will freak Jasper and Carlisle out! Good news is, if he marries her, she can't testify against him...
Just Sus chapter 11 . 9/11/2023
OMG, how great you met Rob! How lucky were you! Sorry about Maghie dying, but it is time for Bella to go home. Hope Edward gets her a good bodyguard. Jasper is a crazy druggie with no moral compass at all. Who is this "C?"
Just Sus chapter 3 . 9/11/2023
I want to kill Jasper right now! What a sick fuck! I hope Carlisle banishes him from the family, or worse! Poor, sweet Bella!
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