Reviews for Duplicity
insomniacinsanity chapter 33 . 8/23/2022
I’m not used to a villainous Carlisle but I liked all of the dramatic twists the story took. I was hoping for a redemption arc for Jasper, but this went so far the other way haha. Thanks for the read
Avid Twi Reader chapter 17 . 8/7/2022
The story is interesting, but I'm not used to Mob Edward being such a coward. It's like he has no backbone or smarts in this story. He has truly let his dad and Jasper fully disrespect him and Bella from day one...
Motherthing chapter 4 . 7/27/2022
I realize that this story has been completed for a long time but can I kill Jasper? S...L...O...W...L...Y

Motherthing
aka Jeri
MissWM chapter 33 . 3/8/2022
This was nice. Thanks for sharing
Ashlie Christine chapter 33 . 2/23/2022
Wonderfull story! Loved every word!
i heart clash chapter 33 . 1/7/2022
Whoaaa what a wild ride this was! Currently on post travel quarantine in Japan (6 days in hotel, 8 at home) so binging on fanfic and so happy to have stumbled upon your story! Love me a good Mobward tale. Omg his revenge on Jasper wa E. I dug it ahah. Also love how the relationship betwee played out and glad they had their HEA! Thank you for the wonderful read 3
Patriciadiane chapter 33 . 7/27/2021
Heck of a St. Patrick's Day...wondering if that little waitress is a spy
Patriciadiane chapter 32 . 7/27/2021
What a great chapter...Jacob showed up after all these years
Marcus and Edward are in business together...
Love these two
Patriciadiane chapter 31 . 7/27/2021
So the police manhandle a pregnant woman. A proud moment
Patriciadiane chapter 30 . 7/27/2021
Esme knew some things evidently but not the whole truth.
WHAT THE HECK? Was Carlisle not their father?
Patriciadiane chapter 29 . 7/27/2021
I WAS SO IMPRESSED WITH BELLA. SMART AND DEADLY
Patriciadiane chapter 28 . 7/27/2021
What an ass Carlisle is, the fear he made Bella go through, the arrogance of oh she is with her Nana, what a heartless -! I'm trying to figure out how much Esme knows - were they married when he brought Jasper home, does she know he is Carlise's son, what tale did he spin, how can he be so cavalier about all of the pain, hurt, and deception he has caused. RANT OVER
Patriciadiane chapter 27 . 7/27/2021
I knew it...He is evil. All for Jasper who doesn't deserve it...Make him suffer. Poor Jane her life destroyed by him. And at 16 hmm see a pattern
Patriciadiane chapter 26 . 7/27/2021
So hard to read and yet so good. Edward certainly served Bella some reality. I think I know who has her...
Patriciadiane chapter 25 . 7/27/2021
Please punish Carlisle. Does Esme know? He is a jerk and that's being nice.
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