Reviews for Duplicity |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I’m not used to a villainous Carlisle but I liked all of the dramatic twists the story took. I was hoping for a redemption arc for Jasper, but this went so far the other way haha. Thanks for the read |
![]() ![]() The story is interesting, but I'm not used to Mob Edward being such a coward. It's like he has no backbone or smarts in this story. He has truly let his dad and Jasper fully disrespect him and Bella from day one... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I realize that this story has been completed for a long time but can I kill Jasper? S...L...O...W...L...Y Motherthing aka Jeri |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was nice. Thanks for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderfull story! Loved every word! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoaaa what a wild ride this was! Currently on post travel quarantine in Japan (6 days in hotel, 8 at home) so binging on fanfic and so happy to have stumbled upon your story! Love me a good Mobward tale. Omg his revenge on Jasper wa E. I dug it ahah. Also love how the relationship betwee played out and glad they had their HEA! Thank you for the wonderful read 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heck of a St. Patrick's Day...wondering if that little waitress is a spy |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a great chapter...Jacob showed up after all these years Marcus and Edward are in business together... Love these two |
![]() ![]() ![]() So the police manhandle a pregnant woman. A proud moment |
![]() ![]() ![]() Esme knew some things evidently but not the whole truth. WHAT THE HECK? Was Carlisle not their father? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I WAS SO IMPRESSED WITH BELLA. SMART AND DEADLY |
![]() ![]() ![]() What an ass Carlisle is, the fear he made Bella go through, the arrogance of oh she is with her Nana, what a heartless -! I'm trying to figure out how much Esme knows - were they married when he brought Jasper home, does she know he is Carlise's son, what tale did he spin, how can he be so cavalier about all of the pain, hurt, and deception he has caused. RANT OVER |
![]() ![]() ![]() I knew it...He is evil. All for Jasper who doesn't deserve it...Make him suffer. Poor Jane her life destroyed by him. And at 16 hmm see a pattern |
![]() ![]() ![]() So hard to read and yet so good. Edward certainly served Bella some reality. I think I know who has her... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please punish Carlisle. Does Esme know? He is a jerk and that's being nice. |