Reviews for Diary of Time
Saissa chapter 42 . 8/22/2020
Wonderful story! Kinda of Violent, but definitely enjoyable!
Saissa chapter 39 . 8/22/2020
Great story so far. I'm guessing that fate seems to be going a bit too far in the pendulum swing to balance out the changes Harry is making..

As for Mafalda Hopkirk - Hermione is going into the 7th year and as such she is already 17 years old which means she is already of age and thus an adult. She did NOT perforn any underage magic!

In canon, Hermione will be turning 18 years old in Sept - within the first 3 weeks of the new school year.

Clearly Mafalda Hopkirk has NO idea how to do her job!
Matt chapter 30 . 8/8/2020
You are an idiot. Your Harry is an idiot. He could have used his invisibility cloak to push Umbridge down the stairs and get rid of her a long time ago. He's killed Death Eaters and she's just as bad as any Death Eater. Why is he putting up with her B.S.?
Matt chapter 30 . 8/8/2020
Have a memory fart? You already had Harry go into the chamber with the books in an earlier chapter. You even had him show Hermione one of the parseltongue books. And Dumbledore was with him when he entered it, as were others. Lost track of your own writing?
Matt chapter 29 . 8/8/2020
Why? I didn't understand it in the book, and I don't understand it here. Why is he writing all those lines with the blood quill? Why doesn't he just take the quill, run away, and call for Amelia Bones? Actually doing the lines makes NO sense. It's crazy. He could just ignore the detention. Again, Dumbledore won't expel him.
Matt chapter 25 . 8/8/2020
You still can't tell the difference between parseltongue and a parselmouth? You really should stop using words when you don't know what they mean.
Matt chapter 21 . 8/8/2020
A person is only a Junior if the son has exactly the same name as his father, INCLUDING the middle name. The younger Tom Riddle's middle name is Marvolo, after his maternal grandfather. This is NOT the same as his father's middle name. Therefore, he does not qualify to be called Junior. He may be called Tom Riddle the Younger to distinguish between father and son, but Junior does not apply.
Matt chapter 8 . 8/7/2020
Harry is NOT a Parseltongue. Parseltongue is a language. A person cannot be a language. Harry is a parselmouth, a person who speaks parseltongue. You are an idiot who can't tell the difference.
Matt chapter 8 . 8/7/2020
Rictusempra is the tickling spell. It doesn't knock someone unconscious.
Matt chapter 7 . 8/7/2020
He should just tell McGonagall and Dumbledore both to Fuck Off and refuse to go to the detentions. I mean, what are they going to do? Dumbledore will never expel him. The most they can do is take points and he won't care.
Matt chapter 5 . 8/7/2020
Why would he call Grimmauld Place Headquarters? It wasn't the Headquarters for anything. It was the place where his mother lived. As far ss we know, he hadn't been there since he left home when he was sixteen.
Matt chapter 4 . 8/7/2020
Mrs. Weasley knitted Harry a jumper (or sweater for Americans), not a sweatshirt. I don't know where you got sweatshirt from.
KRusHII chapter 17 . 6/13/2020
If Prof. McGonagall took Crabbe and Goyle away from the courtyard to the point where no one could hear her berating them, then how did they get back in time for the Incredible Bouncing Ferret Show?
Guest chapter 2 . 5/12/2020
Kewl? Really? How can I take any story seriously when you have a character say "Kewl" unironically?
Acidflame chapter 31 . 4/16/2020
Killing off Luna? Low blow author, very low blow.
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