|Reviews for Luna By The Lake|
| Souen11 chapter 2 . 9/25/2017
Bit of a huge jump, first 'they' can't then they suddenly land in bed together.
And I really don't see why Harry deserves to be punched, people in and out of character always seem to forget that Harry and Ginny broke up at Dumbledores funeral. "Harry wouldn't be happy unless he was going after Voldemort." Most retarded statement in the books in my humble opinion and shows all too well what sort of girl Ginny is and how much she actually knows about Harry.
It's good for a short story but lacks actual character development.
Still... I look forward to what you do with the next chapter.
| saphira88 chapter 2 . 9/23/2017
Please don't make this Harry with oedipus complex. I always wonder why rowling make Harry and Ginny a couple when she looks like Lily evans. Ewww...
| anIndividualist chapter 2 . 9/23/2017
Well, I was pleasantly surprised to see this alert pop up. Nice chapter and I'm glad to see you've decided to go on with this story.
End of chapter one felt a bit...Unsatisfying and unfinished.
Hope there's a chapter 3 somewhere in the future.
| Souen11 chapter 1 . 9/19/2017
Liked the writing, but this doesn't seem finished more like cut off in the middle.
| anIndividualist chapter 1 . 9/9/2017
Nice little fic. Feel free to expand on this.
| saphira88 chapter 1 . 8/28/2017
Come on! That can't be the end!
Please write the sequel! T.T
| LunaLover chapter 1 . 8/24/2017
Just one correction: it's Wrackspurts that get in people's heads, not Nargles. Nargles are the ones that steal people's things.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/24/2017
Please do a next bit make her fall for him
Please please please continue
With a cherry on top
| cmfisher chapter 1 . 8/23/2017
I liked it. I have always thought Luna would be better than Ginny., then again in my opinion, the squid would be better than Ginny. Would like to see more. Thank you