|Reviews for Naruto Make-Out Heroes: Bully edition|
| Borello chapter 3 . 10/21/2020
the story is really good. i hoped to read more chapter.
| kistunenaruto chapter 3 . 2/16/2020
Glad to see you continue this story and not just for the lemons but the interaction between Naruto and everyone is great.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/24/2020
Holy fuck this naruto is so weak. He gets beat up every fucking fight. Geez what a moron
| Darkmagicdragon chapter 1 . 11/18/2019
I like the story and personally I’d love to see Naruto with Ryuko Matoi from Kill la Kill have a lemon. I’d be the first from what I know.
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/22/2019
I hope hinatas mom ends up ending the arranged marriage and divorces him. Taking hinata and hanabi away after hinata goes to her and tells her mother her true feelings. Maybe even saying she'd honestly rather die then go through with an arranged marriage to whatever jackass it is.
Her mom moving over and deciding to get to know the boy she loves and his mom and give him a chance. The arranged marriage being the last straw. Him doing it behind his wifes back and threatening hinata saying if she doesn't keep her complaints to herself he will also force hanabi.
Naruto having previously pointing out to her that because of her fear she didnt notice if he needs her to keep quiet from her mom then how would he be able to force hanabi.
So hinata ends up in school with him and her sister. Her mother gets close to kushina and to him.
Could have her mom as well eventually and then hanabi being jealous of seeing the affection as is with hinata breaks down crying when she finds out her mom is with him. Next thing naruto knows is invited to their home and finds himself called to the bedroom with all three nude in bed holding hanabi's legs open between them.
Their mom having a lot money gets a large place just off campus and brings naruto, kushina and the rest of his growing harem over.
Maybe his mom is in a bit of a relationship with a few of the female teachers who've mostly given up on men and are happy spending time with each other when lonely. Kushina falling for her son helps coax the women shes with into giving him a try and next thing he knows several of the teachers and any girls they're close to are also living with him.
Maybe even his godmother tsunade.
Could have someone like tsume as the leader of an all female yakuza or bodyguard business that actual does a good job and goes out of their way to help single mothers and protecting kids. Being master dog trainers and know for their loyalty and protectiveness.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/22/2019
I'm still at the beginning of the chapter. He got with Hinata which is good in him but she gets left behind? I hope she ends up transferring some how.
Rather she had been at the school in the first place.
| FreeLee chapter 3 . 9/3/2019
Do Chun li next please!
| insanemaelstorm chapter 3 . 8/4/2019
This was good. Love how the relationship between Naruto and Haruko was developed. Like how Naruto saved her. The lemon was great. Due to the built up it felt even better. Can't wait to read more
| Driiii chapter 1 . 8/1/2019
At least you acknowledge what a piece of shit Bakugo is
| heckelman88 chapter 3 . 7/28/2019
Really hope Ryuko Matoi and Mako Mankanshoku be in this story and with Naruto. Would really like to see them in it and sharing Naruto with the others including Satsuki Kiryuin and Nonon Jakuzure.
| Stratos263 chapter 3 . 7/28/2019
Dam that is one hot foursome. At least that asshole has been dealt with
| fictionelement777 chapter 3 . 7/27/2019
Enjoyed it VERY much!
| shinobinoyami16 chapter 3 . 7/27/2019
Love the concept for this story. Can’t wait for future chapter and more girls
| KuronoDono12 chapter 3 . 7/27/2019
Awesome chapter with some great character moments and developments. Haruka from Maken Ki was a bit of surprise especially how you altered her character slightly...However her growth later in the chapter was really well done...Really looking forward to reading the next chapter and seeing who appears next
| SuperSaiyanRose Connor chapter 3 . 7/27/2019
Love this story. So happy to see an update