Reviews for Naruto Make-Out Heroes: Bully edition
King69 chapter 1 . 8/26/2018
A great start
Guest chapter 2 . 8/23/2018
Great lemon make more
Guest chapter 2 . 8/23/2018
Awesome to see you back even if it's just one chapter. This was great as all your work is. Can't wait to see more but take your time.

A whole lot of girls introduced in this chapter. I hope all of them get their turn and even more appear.
spanky1988.ajw chapter 2 . 8/23/2018
Can't wait for chapter 3!
WriterHades chapter 2 . 8/22/2018
Add Akifrom maken ki
WriterHades chapter 2 . 8/22/2018
Add Akimaken ki
Stratos263 chapter 2 . 8/22/2018
Dam that was a hot threesome. Unlikely Sasuke that you will succeed
Darth Stigma chapter 2 . 8/21/2018
Statement: Good chapter keep up the good work cause i see this story has potential.
Question: when are you gonna update your other stories like make-out heroes furry edition?
hero of time45 chapter 2 . 8/21/2018
i love that ruby was the next girl she the best
marcelolimasanchez.ms chapter 2 . 8/21/2018
First: boat Nami (from One Piece) as a swimming teacher (if you can take swimming lessons, of course). Second: Boot Chun Li as a physical education teacher.
insanemaelstorm chapter 2 . 8/21/2018
This was pretty good. Like how ruby was portrayed. Man, the mixture of gary and sasuke is creppy. Liked the lemons. Can't wait to read more
Train Heartnett chapter 2 . 8/20/2018
Awesome !
pitbull4567 chapter 2 . 8/20/2018
Interesting story look forward to more
SuperSaiyanRose Connor chapter 2 . 8/20/2018
Great to see you're still writing.
MarTinez9 chapter 2 . 8/20/2018
It's good to see you writing again hope to see update soon with this story as well as your other work pretty soon.
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