Reviews for Naruto Make-Out Heroes: Bully edition
Hmason chapter 1 . 4/29/2018
good first chapter
FreeLee chapter 1 . 3/20/2018
Can you please add Chun-li as the Gym teacher?
francisthewitcher chapter 1 . 1/3/2018
That was hot, get it? Anyway, you're still working for the new chapter?
Guest chapter 1 . 12/25/2017
Have ever thought of doing a Naruto Make-Out Heroes: Queen's Blade Edition?
Doctor Saturn chapter 1 . 12/18/2017
Can the next story be Naruto Make-Out Heroes: Shota Edition?
Guest chapter 1 . 9/26/2017
Badass make more
Guest chapter 1 . 9/26/2017
Story sucks ass and dick like your futa edition and furry edition. I give those three stories a 1/10.
TheRealCacto chapter 1 . 9/11/2017
Thumbs up
insanemaelstorm chapter 1 . 9/8/2017
Nice chapter. Loved the fluff. Didn't expect you to include my hero academia characters. Wonder who all will be there. Is sasuke going to be a substitute for gary. Can't wait to read more
Kitsuneblue chapter 1 . 9/5/2017
Have you ever thought of doing a fic where the main character is natsu from fairy tail instead of naruto and he has the harem?
Guest chapter 1 . 9/3/2017
This is the worst fanfiction ever I would rather read the next new chapters of Naruto make out heroes: furry when naruto natural is going to have some fun with Anne the horse it would be way better than this fanfiction and the one you called it they both suck crap I give them both a F. Also the other fanfiction that you didn't finish but you should make the next new chapters of Naruto make out heroes: furry first then the other fanfiction you to finish making and you should make a new fanfiction about naruto and the Loud house it would be awesome!
GrandAssassin chapter 1 . 9/1/2017
Hope for more soon
NaruSamaI chapter 1 . 9/1/2017
Do narutoXkushina!
blood enraged chapter 1 . 8/30/2017
my only criticism is that you kinda bashed the 'harem' thing over the head with a warhammer, you should have drawn it out just a tad to make ochako debate it with herself a bit, or maybe draw it out of her bit by bit as she interacts with her friends and starts to get the 'bi bug' as i call it. But like i said, thats my only gripe, otherwise this is a well done 'crossover' and i hope for a speedy update schedule
KuronoDono12 chapter 1 . 8/29/2017
A very interesting concept for a story and I really look forward to reading more. I also really hope that Hinata transfers to Naruto's new school as the relationship the two have is really heartwarming. Look forward to seeing what other girls Naruto meets.
100 | « Prev Page 1 .. 2 3 4 5 6 .. Last Next »