Reviews for Diamond Hound Naruto 金剛石 猟犬
TechnoGalen chapter 7 . 8/18/2018
This is already bordering on Kishimoto crap, it damn well better not be a yaoi.
61394 chapter 42 . 8/18/2018
Why was Tsunades Haki purple isn't it supposed to be black or invisible
Midnight49 chapter 4 . 8/18/2018
Shit after everything Naruto did and to just see a clean up crew just appear and do work nod and leave like nothing ever happened? SHIT I WOULD BE LOSING MY SHIT TOO after seeing that!
fireclaw239 chapter 24 . 8/18/2018
I started to get into this story, but then, you had to throw in one of my biggest pet peeves for all one piece crossovers. this would be giving random enemies the devil fruits/haki/rokushiki powers. I hate when stories act like the powers they're giving the main character are completely unique and then spitting right in your face and just giving these powers away for no other reason then to make the antagonist stronger, even though it wasn't needed. I liked that you used nezumi like that, giving him the name gato nezumi and giving him a decent reason as to why he was there. but orochimaru didn't need a devil fruit, he was already powerful in his own right. I'm sorry, but I can no longer read this story.
Guest chapter 41 . 8/18/2018
But... But this Vulkan Empire thing came out of no where
Guest chapter 42 . 8/18/2018
You need the Toads to use sage mode. I think either the 1st or 2nd did it with out a summon
Greer123 chapter 42 . 8/18/2018
Glad to see that Naruto will be learning Rokushiki.
Guest chapter 42 . 8/18/2018
dear writer please make more chapters
StrongGuy159 chapter 42 . 8/18/2018
Cool chapter continue please.
Escanor chapter 42 . 8/18/2018
well i don't like to force its just Im curious have you thought of giving Naruto a crew and since this stories world shares with one piece and Naruto literally, would it be possible that Naruto might meet the straw hats in the future or the straw hats meet him since we don't know, maybe a storm might wash the thousand sunny to the elemental nations or something.

And i have an idea but im not sure your gunna approve or like or something since arashi has the kyubbi would it be possible for arashi to become good and master sage arts or will you still continue your story where naruto kills arashi and mito gets the other half instead and finally gets forgiven by Naruto in the future of course

i was thinking giving Arashi a chance but when i extra reviewed all the chapters and realized that Arashi was already beyond help, mainly because of Kurama's influence on the poor kid, so i think making him die is the only option because i keep thinking various scenarios in my head and concluded that Arashi has to die because his literally mental and hell bent on killing his elder brother and that would make him the younger version of Doflamingo or Black Beard or both ( i guess so )

But then again this is your story so i guess its up to you

sorry if i sound like forcing you
PEACE!
PinkiePieParty122894 chapter 42 . 8/18/2018
I love the new chapter! :)
Gamelover41592 chapter 42 . 8/17/2018
awesome job and nice reference to one punch man as well
bladetri chapter 41 . 8/17/2018
like XD
Raiden chapter 19 . 8/17/2018
no offence i just wish someone just kills Arashi and Naruto claims the Bijuu and made it whole again and mastered sage mode but then again i don't own this fanfic so im just saying no hard feelings

and i only reviewed mainly because of my curiosity and your story made me so hyped and its very cool of you and i can only name a few fanfics that are at the same levels as yours

God i loved your story
Escanor chapter 19 . 8/17/2018
I apologize once more ididnt think id see chapter 19 explaining who naruto's siblings are im sorry for being an air head to not notice shit
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