That's an INSANELY BADASS QUIRK

I can absolutely see Shoto and Endeavor having a giant fight over this, since poor Shoto probably blames Endeavor for what happened to MC. Dude's probably having war flashbacks of his mom being hospitalized as well

I'm not sure if you did this on purpose, but "tsuki ga kirei" which means "the moon is beautiful" in Japanese is a way of confessing love. Isn't it too early for that?

MY POOR BABY

Write Dabi a little smarter. He's insanely intelligent (his databook rating of 3/5 INT is bs). He's able to discern weaknesses and form plans very quickly, he copied Shoto's phosphor perfectly after only seeing it one time (the wiki even claims he has photographic memory), and he figured out Hawks was a double agent long before anyone else suspected it. He's a conniving little shit who's very pragmatic about how he uses his quirk.

That didn't come across in the final section of this chap

I feel like todoroki and the mc are in an arranged marriage relationship...

Interesting... Her mother is space and her father is time (If we were to assume the temporal hero who's gone missing was her father) but how come her quirk is about liquid?

Very poetic final section!

Btw, Koichi is no longer a vigilante. Our boy is a HERO now! He's also kinda overpowered. Seriously, the whole point of his character was that he was an ordinary dude with a goofy-ass quirk who became a vigilante out of a desire to help those the heroes couldn't. But by the end, he becomes one of the fastest characters in the entire verse, his quirk loses all semblance of its initial comedic value (he doesn't even crawl anymore, damn it! Now he can just run), and he constantly pulls new abilities out of his ass. Dude can probably contend with guys like Hawks and Endeavor.

I don't mind that he became overpowered by the end, but that creative decision completely did away with his initial characterization. But it's also cool as fuck to see him pull all the nutty nonsense he does. Slide 'n Glide is so damn versatile.

End of rant

Just so you know, MHA takes place in the distant future, not 2018. The onset of quirks caused mankind's development to lag, but we still have holograms and tinkertech

The reviewer who said you were too vague obviously wasn't reading the story properly. I think you've been super clear about everything. This is a wonderful story and the main couple is adorable as well

Oh wow your writing style is really beautiful and engaging

Okay, I love the growth and development Bakugou had in this chapter. Since, you can really tell how much he’s changed. And I love the friendship he has with Rei. It’s really sweet :)

I'm gonna give this story another shot and see if I like it more this time around

Sorry, I think I might drop this. I don't think Rei's character flaws are that compelling, and I'm not a fan of the general vagueness about her abilities.

Vagueness is cool and all, but I still don't know what the fuck MC's skill set is.